There once was a girl named Daisy,
She was well known for being lazy.
She would not take any shower
Or wipe her mouth with a paper towel;
She would not brush her teeth
Or say a friendly phrase such as PLEASE;
She would not work or study hard,
Thus she is not given a credit card;
She refuses to listen
And she gets punished often;
She never wins
Because she complains.
“She is slothful.”
“She is sinful.”
People avoid her as if she is trash
That worth No cash.
Until she develops a crush
On a man who makes a liviing with his paint brush.
Daisy becomes less crazy,
Once she stops being lazy,
Love has her empowered,
and she learns to have herself showered,
She is properly dressed
And has her man impressed.
Daisy tries hard
And wins his heart.
“She is beautiful,”
“She is mindful.”
People greet her as if she is a queen
Who is sharp and keen.
Daisy’s story fills people with laughter,
After she and her man have lived happily after.
*****
Hello, How are You?
This poem is Jingle’s work of fiction,
I hope that YOU have fun reading it.
Happy Saturday!
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hahhahaha how funny was this dear, u rock, this made my evening or rather morning lol, thanks for making me smile, my post will be done tomorrow as I have nothing pre written, love ya and keep smilin xxx
ps thanks for including me in the link I appreciate it xx
I think about linking you up,
When I try to find your link,
I saw your previous two comments,
thus I clicked and spent a few minutes in your blog searching for your weekend funnies posts…
😉
That was so funny! I’ve been sick sweetie so I’ve had my posts scheduled. My Hooray for Saturday post will be up at midnight my time. If I’m still awake I’ll add your link then otherwise it will be in the morning 🙂
I love this funny poem jingle. Daisy wouldn’t last long at my house. Being Lazy is a big “NO, NO!” LOL
This is SO AWESOME! Poor Daisy, I am so glad my name is not Daisy! lol I will link both of you up… Thanks for such a fun poem… a great Saturday morning laughter…… hugs,shakira
Never say bad things
When you never know about tomorrow
Reality can change
With a wink of an eye
Love can make people
Going crazy funny and hopeless
Rich people poor people
There is a line of difference
Never judge a book by its cover
We never know what is inside….
Only when we listen and learn
Something good flourishing in our minds
Daisy can be any one
Living in the days of a life
When it takes an enthusiasm
Transformation will draw the line
Though there is a message
Love can triumph until reality bites
In between there will be sufficient time
To make the illusory images right
27/3/10 10.58am take care
Dear Ji 🙂
I am glad to hear of Daisy,
there are Daisys everywhere.
Some are diligent not lazy,
some take time
to comb their hair.
For every Daisy there’s a Dandy,
he it is who primps and poses
never caring he looks vain,
always thinking he supposes
Daisy’s everywhere will crane
their heads to see him, see his ego,
floating on his silly head,
like some elongated bagel
near to brain that’s mainly bread.
Dandys need a bit of loving,
but their conceit needs a shoving!
if a Daisy wants a chance
to muscle in on a Dandy’s dance.
John 😉
ahahaha.
it’s good for daisy that she met the painter.
sometimes, we really should have someone special out there to make us a better person. 😉
how are you Jingle?
good day! (♥♥)
This so reminded me of “The Man Who Didn’t Wash His Dishes” by Phyllis Krasilovsky. Very clever poem and fun…and it did make me smile and after such a long day I needed that!
its very heartwarming-a butterfly emerging from a cocoon.
This is funny and emotional. We never can tell how much powers we have to liberate an imprisoned heart until we try to. Imagine if the painter said he’s just an ordinary painter, I’m sure daisy would have been neglected till death. Nice post, it brings awareness to readers’ mind. cheers!
That is cute….priceless Ji!!!
Here is Mine for the weekend.
[scroll down to the bottom of my Saturday post]
hey… nice poem… gud… gr8… keep up… worth reading.. :)… so by the way i wanted to ask THURSDAY RALLY something… what’s it all about and how to participate in it??? please let me know…
Regards,
Phalgunn Maharishi,
Direktdilze – http://www.direktdilze.wordpress.com
Dear PM:
If you want to be in,
it is simple:
comment under my week 12 (next Wednesday) post to let me know,
post a poem in your own blog on Wednesday or Thursday,
visit and comment on a minimum 12 blogs that are new to you, since you are fresh, you visit 12 participants from my list,
after you are done, comment to let me know….
in addition,
when some other poets comment for you, you must return favors…
please let me know your other questions,
here is one link you shall read carefully, no need to do it every week, but welcome any time when you are ready,
https://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/03/24/thursday-poets-rally-week-11-march-24-30-2010/
please read the link when you are free…
lol.
I do hope you are having a wonderful Saturday!
poor poor Daisy
for needing a man
to make her less lazy.
daisy needs to find her self
to find her wealth
inside
her self.
She’ll find her inner stellar
Without any feller!
:o)
This is very beautiful,my friend!
I love the story! 🙂
Very optimistic words!!
10X for sharing it!! 🙂
Have a magnificent day!!! 😉
Wow you put a lot of work into that, very cute well done!
Love can be a catalyst…nice job!
Thank you all for the encouraging comments!
😉
Happy Wednesday!