If, in the light of things, you vanish
4 real, yet wanly withdrawn
2 a normal but outlandish
Relation, like the moon leaving before dawn
2 hide behind clouds.
I wish that you invisibly delight this place.
Double your compassion,
Maximize your dimension,
Direct the worst in us
10 thoughts on “Oh, Star.”
Sometimes in the light of day…we are unable to see what is right in front of us…the stars are there…but we fail to see them…thanks for your poignant poem.
Lovely, lovely star.
I love star poems, well done jingle.
the last line is a hit.
I love watching the stars, since a child, I have found them to be amazing. Your poem is lovely and very well expressed.
I have missed the Stars lately it has be cloudy…
Lovely star poem, enjoyed it very much 🙂
simply fantastic. very attractive poem.
This is absolutely soothing to a dwindling soul! Don’t stop writing!
Have a lovely Tuesday!
You have done a great job with your words and expressions. Hope all is well and you are having fun.