Thursday Poets Rally Week 23 Poem Post-Perfect Poet Award Acceptance

Once a snowflake fell

On my brow,

I blinked my eyes

And it cries

And wet my eyes.

I liked it,

I missed it,

I kissed it,

I tasted it.

My act made its family happy,

One by one,

Two by two,

The snowflake’s siblings, cousins, and friends

Engulfed me.

They are so cool,

I got happy 2.

I squeezed them,

Loved my new friends,

The fun has No ends.

They feel No shame of being plain,

And transformed into spring rain.

Oh, My!

I got so very high,

And I did not realize why:

All of a sudden,

I was frozen!

Under the spring shower,

I turned into a flower.


This post is for Thursday Poets Rally Week 23 Poem Post.

Thanks to Trisha at Trisha for nominating Jingle the week 22 Perfect Poet Award.

As for Week 23,  I nominate A Poem A Day at adkwriter15 for the Perfect Poet Award.

Happy Thursday 2 You All!

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The Perfect Poet Award Week 22

Thursday Poets Rally Week 23 (June 17-23, 2010)

Hello, Everyone!

Welcome to Thursdays Poets’ Rally week 23.

On week 22, Most of you have done beautiful job! I appreciate your willingness to listen and contribute. Cheers!

Rules to Participant:

#1: If you are a poet who is new and want to join our Thursday Poets’ Rally, post a poem in your own blog, and comment here with Your Poem link Included to let me know, I will add your on, visit 18 participants to fulfill the requirement.

#2: If you are previous participants, please feel free to visit either 18 fresh poets in my list, or visit 9 participants that are new to you, 9 fresh poets in my list.

#3: Very important, please make sure to comment back to return compliment when you are given comments by our participants.

#4: After you have commented a minimum 18 blogs, let me know and you will remain on the list the following week as active poets.

PS:Your link will NOT appear as participants UNLESS you commented below, I need your word of approval so that we have mutual understanding and respect upon this event. Thank U in Advance and Have FUN on the Rally!

Week 23 Participants Awards:

Three Poetry Awards:

The Most Consistent Poet Award

The Most Persistent Poet Award

The Most Admirable Poet Award

will be assigned to participants by Jingle on or by Sunday. Have fun!

Jingle strongly suggest that you explore 18 fresh poets to meet the requirement,

And visit all participants to get more feedback of your own work.

Week 23 Participants:

Thursday Poets Rally Week 22 Post:

Please feel free to visit and comment for 18 poets that are NEW to you. Let me know after you are done so that you are marked as done, 😉 😉 😉  Thank You in advance. Your link may NOT be linked in if you failed to meet the above requirements.

The Perfect Poet Award Winners of previous week will be automatically linked in under participants list…Thanks and enjoy.

Week 22 The Perfect poet Award post:

With the following 20 winners:


Brian: (done, 😉 😉 ;))



Wordwand: (done, 😉 😉 ;))

Soulintention: (done, 😉 😉 ;))

Megzone:, 😉 😉 ;))

Celebrating a year: (done, 😉 😉 ;))

Noha: (done, 😉 😉 ;))

Suzi: (done, 😉 😉 ;))

Fiveloaf: (done, 😉 😉 ;))

Gally: (done, 😉 😉 :))

Pink lady: (done, 😉 😉 ;))


Joycefied: (done, 😉 😉 ;))

Joe Suzz: (done, 😉 😉 ;))


Ms. Peaches: (done, 😉 😉 ;))

Sweet sin:

Jingle: (done, 😉 😉 ;))

HearT speak: (done, 😉 😉 ;))


Kavita: (done, 😉 😉 ;))

C it my way: (done, 😉 😉 ;))

Dcartseen: (done, 😉 😉 :))

NotATamelion: (done, 😉 😉 ;))

Julie: (done, 😉 😉 ;))

Sk: (done, 😉 😉 ;))

Joanny: (done, 😉 😉 ;))

Doni: -lived-love-affair (done, 😉 😉 ;))

The vivacious…:, 😉 😉 ;))

Windchaser: (done, 😉 😉 ;))

Ms. Peaches:

(done, 😉 😉 ;))

Nelly: (done, 😉 😉 ;))  (done, 😉 😉 ;))

Seth: (done, 😉 😉 ;))

Hoiden: (done, 😉 😉 ;))

Unprecedentedintellectual:, 😉 😉 :))


Megzone: (done, 😉 😉 ;))

Noha: (done, 😉 😉 ;))

A poem a day:, 😉 😉 ;))

Lovetheloop: (done, 😉 😉 ;))

Andy: (done, 😉 😉 ;))

Liz: (done, 😉 😉 ;))



Suzi: (done, 😉 😉 ;))

Tracy: (done, 😉 😉 ;))

Adam: (done, 😉 😉 ;))

The Arts Webshow: (done, 😉 😉 ;))

Liz: (done, 😉 😉 :))

D. S. Lear: (done, 😉 😉 ;))

Pancakebliss: (done, 😉 😉 ;))

Heartspell: (done, 😉 😉 ;))

Gally: (done, 😉 😉 ;))

buttercup600: (done, 😉 😉 ;))

Lynn: (done, 😉 😉 ;))

Dancingfreak: (done, 😉 😉 :))

Shoelessboywonder: (done, 😉 😉 ;))

Wordwand: (done, 😉 😉 :))

Ibok: (done, 😉 😉 ;))

Fiveloaf: (done, 😉 😉 ;))

Pinklady: (done, 😉 😉 ;))


Gally: (done, 😉 🙂 :))

Soulintention: (done, 😉 😉 :))



Week 23 Fresh Poets to Know or Explore:

Buttercu Jack’s Poems Blog:

Jessica’s Japes:


Go, Grant, Go:

Jeque’s Web Nook:



Carolee Sherwood:

The jet club:

Learn to love the loop:


Sam I am (NOT):

Bodybuildingpoet’s Blog:

Freak out in a moon age day dream:

Ray Sharp:


Poet’s Prose Blog:

Slam It on the Fridge:

Arrows in the Fog:

Deep thoughts unknown:

Long live the poet:


Dreaming the shadows:

Just below my skin:


Signal Fires:

A Labyrinth:

Wild, precious life:

Popsiclesongs and other poems that don’t rhyme:


How I learned to Listen to my voice in my head:

p600’s Blog:

HearT Speak:

Meenas17’s Weblog:

The Motivationlocation’s Blog:

Poems to ponder:

Wasting time:

Fabulous At Fifty:

J. S. Morgane’s Universe:

Smiles and Scars:

The Writing Ant:

Kiss or Three:

The White Buffalo Woman’s Blog:

Light Press:

Leadtopaper’s Blog:

Writing Days-Happy Days:

Bustbees42’s Blog:

World of Poetry:



KJ’s Blog:

My walking path:

Chocolate Lover’s Blog:





V Is 4 Victims-Secrets R Revealed Under Hidden Video Camera

Mathew and his wife Dove have been married for more than a dozen years. They share two beautiful children, Ken and Jen, a nine year old boy and a seven year old girl. The family of four are immigrants living in the U. S.

Mathew has a tenured job at a university in Fort Worth, Texas. He loves his wife and believes that life is so far perfect for him.

Until the fateful day comes, that’s when his wife’s younger sister Daisy comes to live with them.

Daisy is single. She has broken up with her 2 year long boy friend because she finds out that he has been cheating on her. Daisy is hurt and after she finishes her bachelor’s degree back in her home country, she comes to the U. S. visiting her sister, wishing to get accepted to a university in the U. S. to change her fate.

Unfortunately, she has been rejected by all three majors she has applied. Thus she has to face the music: go back to her country to find a job, or stays in the U. S. by changing her status from visiting relatives to student.

Dove loves her sister and considers her sister an innocent victim. And Dove has called her parents via international phone service to discuss the situation. Of course, American dream is not easily to be given up. Dove is asked to do whatever she can to support Daisy. It is an order from her respected parents.

Thus, on this lovely evening, Dove showers herself fresh and clean, and lays herself gently in her husband’s arms the way she always does…Mathew is about forty years old, he always feels pleased by his wife’s full breasts and delicate skins…he gets high almost instantly, without worrying about whether or not the kids have fallen asleep, or what Daisy has been doing in her guest room, the couple start their love making with deep passions.

They make some noises, but hunger and thirst overcome fears. They continue doing it, fully enjoying their heat.

Suddenly, Dove pushed her husband away while he is at his peak point.

“What’s the matter?” Mathew whispers, his hands gently squeeze his wife’s breasts.

“Nothing, I simply want to stop.” Dove tells a whopper, she wants to make a deal.

“I know there must be something, I can do anything for you, dear.”  Mathew is out of breath…He almost begs his wife.

“I want you to help my sister Daisy.”  Dove knows that if she does not spit it out, she may not have another chance.

“On behalf of you, dear, I will help her.”  Mathew whispers in her ears.

“How?” Dove is curious, holding back her desire for her hubby.

“Trust me, I will figure out a way.” Mathew pulls his wife closer, placing his lips on hers, with their bodies pressing hard…

With the help of Mathew, Daisy is accepted into the university with a major related to Mathew, Daisy is not really interested in studying under her brother-in-law, but she has no other options at the moment. Hopefully, she can switch her major later the year…

Daisy has trouble with her spoken English, she struggles a lot with her homework assignments…Thus, at home, with the support of her sister Dove, Daisy has easy access to Mathew, they would discuss homework solutions at the study before dinner time, with Dove being busy in the kitchen preparing for dinner.

Everything seems so fine, everyone is getting what they want. Daisy would play with Ken and Jen during weekends, help them with their homework assignments. The family of five goes to picnic at Locale Park at times…Dove is happy..

Until one day, Dove wakes up in the middle of the night, finding that her husband is not sleeping next to her. She realizes something, something really bad. Yet she holds her horses and pretends to be asleep. And when her husband comes back to their room and lays himself gently next to her, she breathe evenly making sure he does not know she is awake,

And the next day, she played the video camera that was installed in her house a few years ago…Dark secrets are revealed under the hidden camera. Her heart sinks when she sees that her husband has been going to her sister’s room every night after she is asleep.

She pretends knowing nothing.  She swallows hard when her sister Daisy smiles happily at her when she takes out the most festive dishes in the evening.

And the next day, after Mathew and Daisy come home, they can not find Dove, but see a note left on the table:

“To my dearest husband and my most darling sister:

I was diagnosed with breast cancer and the doctor said that both of my breasts must be removed to save my life. I have decided to take one third of the savings and go back to our home country to get treated…I will be gone for 2 or 3 years…please take good care of the kids and wait for news from me.

With love,


And Dove has simply disappeared…Mathew can not quite his job, and Daisy is in the middle of her studies …They choose to remain, while Mathew has tried his best trying to contact his wife via other family members, but no one ever sees Dove.

Dove has no breast cancer. She has figured out a way to get out of her failed marriage, and she has used some money to change her appearance so that nobody recognizes her. Then she has used the rest of the money to open a private business in a far away town in her home country, her goal is to be independent, stay single, and give love to those who are poor or disadvantaged…

After two years, a lawyer comes to visit Mathew and his marriage to Dove is announced to be over.

“I am a victim of all these.” Mathew cries, but no one hears him.

Who is the victim in this story? You decide.


This post is an entry for ABE Wednesday and Alphabe-Thursday, V is for Victims…

For more V posts, please  visit ABC Wednesday. and Alphabe-Thursday

This post is also an entry for Theme Thursday (Camera) at Theme Thursday

This is a work of fictionJingle is a new hand in writing short stories. Please tolerate and be gentle!

Thank You for reading and commenting!

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