From the news, I know Haiti has an earthquake on January 13, 2010, how horrible it is if it happens to one of us! Natural disasters hurt humans and make the victims feel hopeless some times, but help is offered by many and let’s pray for those, hope that things get under control and more lived are rescued and saved.
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I have nil control over my fate
When it comes to earthquake,
The nightmare hits my place
With unstoppable pace.
The floor cracks,
The Building falls.
Rocks crumble,
Animals stumble.
Humans get buried
While rescuing teams hurried.
…
When I open my eyes,
I see dead flies
And wounded mice,
…
Lying in bed,
I learned that my parents are dead!
So sad,
So mad,
About this bad
Fate I have had!
Becoming homeless,
And feeling helpless,
Strangers care for me instead.
Being still in dread
Of this disastrous dismay,
I chew a slice of bread
And wonder
Where is my home to stay.
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Have A Blessing Day! Everyone!
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Make The Pain disappear:
https://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/01/16/make-the-pain-disappear/
Jingle Nozelar 
Thank you for visiting my blog. I’m glad to have discovered yours and I’ve been touched reading these heartfelt reflections about the suffering in Haiti.
Hello, San:
It is great to see you in my place.
I appreciate your kind feedback on my poem and
Wishing you an elegant day ahead. 🙂
It’s an unimaginable thing – how terrifying and sad for the people in Haiti.
Agree.
Glad to see you in. 🙂
I am overwhelmed by sadness at their loss. I don’t think I can even imagine how heartbreaking it must be there.
Agree, Debbie,
I have noticed that you look like a fairy, but you do carry kindest human heart.
Thank you for the nice memo. 🙂
“wounded mice” seems so sad.
What a tragedy for sure.
I guess we are all passing from the alone again into the alone. But we are never really alone.
Blessings,
xo
Hello, Jannie:
You always bring in energy when you come,
with people such as you existing in our lives, nobody will ever feel alone.
I am excited about your visit.
See you in a second. 🙂
a very harsh tragedy from Mother nature, put into delicate words from the master, we all grieve the human loss and disgust ourselves with the looting, well done the emergency teams who are always on hand from countries as America to help RIGHT AWAY, well done friend..:)
Thank you,
wishing you a neat evening. 🙂
what an amazing poem that shows what some many people are dealing with right now. I do hope and pray everyone will soon be fine..
I appreciate your encouragement and kind notes,
have A Day As Beautiful As Your Family. 🙂
Thanx for keeping me in ur blog group for poems.. I wrote a new one just now .. So I can say I’m in eh.. Have a good day 🙂
Hello, Marya:
welcome to join in.
I have painted your link orange, please comment on 12 blogs and let me know after you are done.
Sweet Dreams.
I will catch up with you later when I am free. 🙂
A wonderfully written poem about such a tragic event. Well done.
Hello, Julia:
Thank you for the kind note.
wishing you a relaxing evening. 🙂
This makes my heart feel heavy and helpless. I wish peace and blessings on the lost and those left behind to live with the loss. So sad.
Hi, Jamie:
Thank you for dropping a nice note here.
Your participation is greatly appreciated.
take care, friend. 🙂
Very nice poem
Thank you, Sandra. 🙂
Unfortunately, the fact we can watch n still can’t help is excruciating! The lack of medical care is so upsetting-
I work with a couple extremely traumitized Dominicans- who used to live right next to Haiti-
Melancholy poem- Being homeless is a unique feeling. Being a survivor without family left- must be so desolate a feeling…
Dear SnaggleTooth:
Thank you for the positive feedback.
It is hard when it comes natural disasters, for ordinary folks such as us, we can only pray and wish for better results.
Glad to know that you have connection to folks close to Haiti..Bless you, great and caring being you are. 🙂
tragic, heartbreaking, can happen to anyone, cannot stop Mother nature, but so many lives needlessly lost 😦
True,
We humans are helpless when Mother nature gets upset. 😦
Hope that things get under control with those selfless rescuing teams..
Thank you for the remarks of gold. 🙂
i haven’t been watching the news because i don’t want to see the hurt in haiti sensationalized. it is a tragedy though. just terrible 😦
Hi, Jessie:
Thank you for dropping in.
I heard it from radio, barely watch TV.
Have a graceful evening. 🙂
Jingle: this is one of your best poems. It is very moving. Have you ever been in an earthquake yourself?
Hello, Moe:
I write this poem 100% by myself, I mean lines hit me in a moment of realization.
Thank you for loving this poem. 🙂
Best
Jingle
The roughness in speech echoes how the speaker is shaken. Thank you for sharing your poem.
you are very welcome,
Yousei Hime,
It is a great joy to have you in my blog. 😉
this is all very sad,
These lines:
“Becoming homeless,
And feeling helpless”
A fear everyone has no matter where they are. We can only pray the after shocks are mild and everyone will be found.
Have a great day,
Gerardine
Thank you for the kid-willed comment, Gerardine,
What we can do is to pray and hope for the best…
Enjoy A Graceful Evening. 😉