You take my breath away,
You dominate my mind every single day,
You are the music I play,
You are the dream I chase in every way.
You take my breath away
When you walk past me,
You take my breath away
When you look at me.
You take my breath away
When you appear so very nice,
You take my breath away
When you enrich my life with sugar and spice.
You take my breath away
When you say hi,
You take my breath away
When you leave without a goodbye.
You take my breath away
When you pay attention to others,
You take my breath away
When you choose to play with your brothers.
You have got me shaking,
You have got me wanting.
My breath has now be taken,
I must win you to overcome this aching.
Like spring water from a stream on a sizzling summer day,
You take my breath away.
You take my breath away constantly,
I wish You could be especially with me.
The Perfect Poet Award Week 2o
Hello, how R U?
This poem is for Thursday Poets Rally Week 21 poem post.
Raji has nominated Jingle for week 20 The Perfect Poet Award.
It is such a sweet honor, Raji, Thank You for the kindness.
U have been active and writing best ever poetry along the weeks,
I wish you the best, Raji. Please continue working on it…xxx
For week 21, Jingle wish to nominate Trisha at Trisha The Perfect Poet Award.
Trisha has been 100% active not only in participating Poets Rally, but also
on commenting, encouraging, following almost all POETS who are either
previous participants or have been represented as fresh poets. Thank You, Trisha,
for the outstanding job done. I appreciate your excellence and wishing you the best!
Happy Thursday!
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Jingle Nozelar 
dear jingle,
marvellous poem. Just loved it. Thanks for the sweet words of encouragement and the nomination. Its priceless to me.
I almost forgot that today is thursday. have placed the post:
http://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com/2010/06/03/green-blue-white-perfect-poet-post-4-jingle/
peace and happiness 4u 4ever.
thank you for good 2.
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A lovely poem, Jingle! I always have such a good time here!
Thank you for coming in!
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a very beautiful poem …
Nice you.
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And you jingle take my breath away with this amazing poem.
Viola:
Sweet you.
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This is one of your best. 🙂 Hope you are having a beautiful day. 🙂
Sweet Doraz,
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I agree with Luisa u just cannot do any wrong this was amazing, u are amazing xxx
Nice to see u, William:
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It sounds like the lyrics to a love song– I can hear the music in your words. Lovely! http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/
Sweet you,
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Just a lovely lyrical poem of love…it was so much fun to read…thanks for your poem.
Thank you for the compliment,
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this lovely poem has taken my breath away.well done jingle.
this is for you http://myawardscorner.blogspot.com/
Wordwand:
u r very thoughtful!
This is such a nice poem of love. Great job. Heartspell
Thanks a lot,
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lovely
Suzi:
have a nice evening!
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Trisha rocks! YOU rock!
I love your poem.
It rained today and everything smells so great.
xo
cool you,
miss you,
will be over in a minute!
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Jingle — were you talking to ME in that comment directly above? If so — thanks.
I am looking forward to posting for the rally in the next couple weeks. Would you believe I am STILL making my way over to wonderful bloggers who commented on my post 2 weeks ago??? I love all you guys so much, but am strugling to keep up with reading and commenting on blogs lately.
And since I try not to worry or struggle in life, I get over to blogs when I can, more or less in the order comments arrive at my blog. So is my plan for now.
xo
xo
Please feel free to comment for Week 21 participants….
in general, they would love comments and more likely to return favors…
Good Luck!
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love you, girl!
Welcome to the Rally any time.
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you really know how to lighten someone’s mood will you poems.
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I know i may be a little late wrapping up my participation.
I had a really long day at work and couldn’t get any time online.
Anyhow, i here now. lol
great!
nice to see you !
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Lovely poem. I know the feeling. 🙂
many thanks!
Great poem that sums up those feelings of like or love for someone else.
thanks!
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Very lovely; this poem made me smile. 🙂
Very kind of you saying that.
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lovely poem Jingle and thanks for the kind words 🙂
I am really sorry, couldnt participate in rally this week… was so busy with work missed it… next time willdefinately participate 🙂
happy friday 🙂
No problem, Raj..
See you next time!
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wonderful poem!!
nicely written!!…it was fun reading!
c my post if posibl 🙂
Thank you,
u r kind!
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Thanks for your comment, or I wouldn’t have seen your poetry. I especially love this one. It was so powerful.
Sweet you,
Smiles!
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leaves me wanting my breath taken away great piece thanks for sharing!
Thank you, 😉
Congrats to all of your wonderful writers.. I just enjoy reading what you write. I know there is no way I could do what you do..
Have an amazing day and weekend..
Same to u, Amy!
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Hi Jingle, i love this piece…portrays a breathlessness that one has to experience to understand. Makes one think that when you are with this person, the rest of the world does not exist. It evokes envy in anyone who does not have that special someone.
Tell me what you think of these pieces that are so dear to me:
My Scraggly Carcass, A day in Paradise, Man Of My Dreams,Fate Woke Me Up One Day, Until he smiled
Thanks, i will be over to your place in a minute!
And you take my breath away, with your dedication to all this and your continued support…..well done Pete
Pete, u r sweet!
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Thanks – I nominate Pete Marshall for week 21 great guy and poet
cool job!
Nice one! love the rhyming.
My poem for this week
http://xcept.blogspot.com/2010/06/rash.html
okay,
this time, you need to visit 12 poets that are NEW to you, which means they never visited you and comment for them, let me know after you are done!
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I will place your link in.
you take everyones breath away with your sweetness xxx
thanks, William!
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your poems inspire me… you have such a beautiful way with words. keep on writing, jingle =)
Sweet of you, Pinklady,
Nice to see you today!
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A insufficient friends riding bicycles and stopping to assign a wide-ranging, cheery afternoon on a tough strand along the Lhasa River is a harmonious issue in life.