When you see me wet in the rain,
You know I am traveling
on a one-way train.
You may wonder aloud
what’s all the
frowning and the
Groaning and the
Crying and the
Trying all about.
My mind stops functioning
And refuses to take
That unpaved road
As images in my brain
Begin to download.
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Write a a poem, or anything that is fiction in 55 words. Give it a try and notify G-man
I used web tool to count my writing which is exactly 55 words… WORDCALCULATOR
Happy Flash Friday 55!
I value Your Opinion!
You Are The Best!
Jingle Nozelar 
that is beautiful Ji
nice to see u!
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Your 55 words are wonderfully penned my friend.
it is kind of you, Viola!
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What more can I say just as expected lovely, imaginative and inspiring..tQ.
sweet you,
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“refusing to take the unpaved road” you have driven this into a beautiful 55! Have a great weekend!
thank you,
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This is wonderful 🙂
many thanks!
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Very fine job with this task of 55 words….well crafted poem.
Thank you,
have a nice day!
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That is an interesting challenge to take, just 55 words, but you have managed to write a wonderful poem. A very fine job indeed.
Nice to see you,
Happy Friday!
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this is lovely. loved the beautifull 55.
Thank you, Trisha!
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You captured how i felt during all of April and May.
really, sweet!
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Wow….I am smiling at this lovely poem Jingle. 🙂
many thanks!
Doraz!
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Great poem. Happy weekend!
Sweet you,
So kind!
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this was beautifully written, jingle!
It is kind of you.
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