Once a snowflake fell
On my brow,
I blinked my eyes
And it cries
And wet my eyes.
I liked it,
I missed it,
I kissed it,
I tasted it.
My act made its family happy,
One by one,
Two by two,
…
The snowflake’s siblings, cousins, and friends
Engulfed me.
They are so cool,
I got happy 2.
I squeezed them,
Loved my new friends,
The fun has No ends.
They feel No shame of being plain,
And transformed into spring rain.
Oh, My!
I got so very high,
And I did not realize why:
All of a sudden,
I was frozen!
Under the spring shower,
I turned into a flower.
*****
This post is for Thursday Poets Rally Week 23 Poem Post.
Thanks to Trisha at Trisha for nominating Jingle the week 22 Perfect Poet Award.
As for Week 23, I nominate A Poem A Day at adkwriter15 for the Perfect Poet Award.
Happy Thursday 2 You All!
😉 😉 😉
The Perfect Poet Award Week 22
I loved this delightful uplifting poem, Jingle. Congrats on your award! Heartspell
LOved the poem…..
congrats on ur award……
will participate actively in week 23 rally…..
jingle… if we do not finish week 22 we can’t participate in week 23?
u r right,
u have the time to finish week 22 before doing week 23…
it only takes 1 to 2 hours to finish commenting for 18 poets…
Congratulations Jingle! This is a very “cool” poem.
Oh and I hope you’ll check out my latest endeavor…always inspired to try something new!
http://soundoffreedom.wordpress.com/2010/06/16/whammy-wednesdaydear-moon/
This is indeed a delightful uplifting poem…one which compliments the season of spring…thanks for your gift of poetry.
You are amazing and will be back often:)
Oh, Jingle this poem is a delight. I enjoyed reading it so much. You even put a smile on my face.
“I was frozen! Under the spring shower” Those lines were my favorite in a cool metaphorical piece. Congrat to you and everyone participating this week!
My post is up
http://dustus.wordpress.com/2010/06/16/humanity-displayed-for-poetry-rally/
Enjoy. Cheers 😉
I enjoy reading it few times too!! so nice to read!!!
amazing:)
You do know how to live life. I am smiling at your words. I save this played out and loved it. 🙂 Hope all is well. I am playing catch up. lol 🙂
transformation into spring rain…..nice image….bkm
another great poem, flowing nicely ! well done jingle.
Lovely poem. 🙂
Loved it…..simply Awesome Jingle.
I like it.
Congrats too.
Beautiful poem Ji!
this is cute and adorable. loved it. 🙂
I will not have enough time this week to check out the other blogs but still want to share my poem this week….
http://msjstar1275.blogspot.com/2010/06/forever-young.html
delightful, enjoyed the ending.
Congratulations on the award! This is a nice poem.
Oh no.. Snow talk.. Boo.. Too funny.. We have wild winters and I just am enjoying the warm weather..
Have a great day..
I enjoy the thought of the snowflake having a family, very creative!! 🙂
What a lovely poem, Jingle.
beautiful… simply beautiful!!! =)
Ji, WOW!!! This is the best poem I’ve read in 30days!
I so ADORE it, and I mean every bit of what I’ve said!
Happy Day!
This is so beautiful! Makes me remember why I live in a place that’s covered in snow half the year instead of somewhere it’s warm all the time! Thank you sosososo much for the nomination!
yay, we are all flowers! 🙂
Makes me wish for winter in this Texas inferno!
I am here from Jingle’s Thursday rally…Hi Jingle!
very beautiful write.. the transformation into a flower… makes me see this poem in diffrent perspective 🙂
lovely write…
hi Jingle!
nice, sweet and wonderful poem…
Especially loved the last two lines 🙂
keep writing..
Btw, i’ve nt been active on my blog since Ive been travelling for quite sometime…
Hence my apologies If I revert late to your comments..
I thank you for all the wonderful awards given by you and wld post them as soon as Im back from travel..
thnks and keep up the good wrk!
Such a happy surreal tale– loved it1
http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/
You are most definitely a flower. Loved the delight in this.
Hi Jingle,
Got your message a little late. Will be interested for next Thursday though for sure 🙂 I like this idea. Keep it up!
the Rally last until next Tuesday…
it is not too late,
you can link in and visit 18 poets tonight if you wish to,
thank you for the feedback!
😉
please let me know.
Loved these lines –The fun has No ends.
They feel No shame of being plain,
And transformed into spring rain.
Truly Amazing! Love this poem.
Joanny
just letting you know i have finally finished. took me some time i know, but working now two jobs doesnt leave much time for poetic fun. just know i will always finish the task just may take me longer than some.
commendable! (:
Well done poem. I want to be a flower 😛
Awesome poem!!
Such a cute poem Jingle, I saw my first snowflake in Pittsburgh at the age of 22, ha ha.. Brought back those memories, the delight of a cold snowflake on my warm face, the first snow ball fight.. How can I forget that?! This might just be my favorite snowflake poem of them all!!
😉 and love.
Rachana.