Deep in the sea,
On a sunny day,
A blue fish is ready to play.
To her dismay,
A shark is coming her way,
The blue fish could become a prey.
Detecting the shark in her harm’s way,
The blue fish sums up her bravery,
And invites the shark to her party next day.
The shark winked to agree,
The blue fish is free
On her way to her favorite bay.
It is another beautiful day,
With the shark guarding the doorway,
A school of fish have bubble cake to pass their day!
Hello, How are You? It is Tuesday, I am supposed to do Haiku, I wrote it as a poem
which is made up of five (5) Haikus, I hope that you enjoy reading it!
Thank You for the time, Happy Tuesday! 🙂 😉 😉
34 thoughts on “A Blue Fish Is Ready To Play”
Only in your Haiku , the fish WINKS! Way cool.
Thank you Jingle for reminding me , I did not see the repeat. THX!
I love the fun in this poem, the sweetness flows as easily as the fish swims.
Have a great day!
I love how the shark winked to agree. Well done and fun my friend. 🙂 Have a great Tuesday 🙂
Very creative. I enjoyed this!
This is really cute!
what a fun and magical poem…bubble cake! i love it. thanks for the constant encouragement as well. always leave me with smiles.
You are amazing dear lovely Jingle! I love your poem 🙂
I wrote a short verse here for you about what happens for me and all of us whenever I/we read your loving words:
…love you dear Jingle 🙂
I do love your Haiku/poem it is really cute and fun to read. My favorite lines are “It is another beautiful day,
With the shark guarding the doorway,” I am a rhyming person. Love it!
you haikus were simply beautiful and I sense a story in these, telling us no matter how big a person is, small things count, this was clever and as always you make a Tuesday SPECIAL xxxx
nothing i like more
than a blue fish at my door
swim more and have fun
I’m addicted to writing haiku! Jingle you inspire me! Something for you http://wp.me/pLvP2-6s it’s a small thank you ❤
Beautiful poem, so fresh! Thank you for your comments on my blog! 🙂
Smart little fish and the winking probably saved it from the big bad shark… I enjoy reading Haiku, I first heard of it at Blissbait
Just wanted to say thanks for stopping by my blog. I like the way you have yours set up.
Intention so dark
The little fish a mark!!
Little fish is cunning
It got her surviving
And thus she keeps on thriving.
Well done fishy!
Lots of fun to read. Great beat! Happy ending! 🙂
I love the ocean imagery! Takes me outside of my bedroom, a very rare treat these days. 🙂
Happy Tuesday to you!
I loved this.. I love the fish and the smell of the sea.. Happy Tuesday..
Love the Poem … Very light and fun!!
That is just so cute and fun. I’ve heard so many of my friends saying how wonderful you are, so I had to come and find out for myself. They were right!
Good stuff, haiku is such a hard art ot master but such a fun skill to learn. Saying more with less is a good skill for a poet. Anyhow, since I effed up the award business the other day, I left you a poem on ym page thanking you (and the rest of the crazy poets I’ve met thru your blogroll anbd comments. If you wanna check it out, check it here. Have a great one duder!
Thanks again for reading, and backatcha!
Well… that’s very interesting .
Such a sweet and warm poem…brought a smile to my face…thanks!
I like the happy ending.
Okay, God or Goddess, whichever You may be! THIS ROCKS! I’m leaving with it in my heart! I LOVE HAIKUS and LOVE writing and reading them, and this is WONDERFUL! You just gifted me greatly! Thank You and Cheers and Namaste. 🙂
wow. the blue fish seemed so irresistible even the shark agreed to play.
such a charmer, jingle.
good day! 😉
what a dinky little poem and a great way to deal with sharks 🙂
this is awesome and cute, just like you 🙂
You know how to make me smile and how to finish my day in this moment!
I like the new haiku a lot!!
I will sleep with a beautiful picture in my mind.
Enjoy the moment, mon amie!!! 🙂 😉
this was very cute & creative Jingle 😉
I love the playfulness of this one J! 🙂
how are you?
I like it too… fun way to make haiku….