Flinging out of the furnace
R the flames
That leap forward,
With No sound,
The intense desire
Of the fire
Bursts like a hungry hound,
Searching and wolfing down preys
On the hunting ground.
Creative fire
Has NO patience,
Carries NO weight.
Creative fire,
Starts from sparks of flint,
Burns from the deepest part
Of your heart
In thousand of degree
And sets you free
In unexpected way!
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Hi, How Are U?
I wish U A Happy Tuesday! 😉 😉 😉 I am getting ready for Poets’ Rally Week 6…
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Perfect capture, I could see the sparks flying in this piece, and crackles of fresh timber exploding within each line.
Thank U, Mark.
I am tickled by your compliment.
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JINGLE…i LOVE THIS POEM…QUITE DESCRIPTIVE OF A TRUE FIRE, A SPIRITUAL FIRE AND THE FIRE INSIDE A WRITER, IGNITED BY THE FLINT OF HIS PENCIL! i ALSO READ “ABOUT ME”…YOUR ENGLISH IS NOT AS BAD AS YOU THINK! i WOULD DARE SAY BETTER THAN MY …WHATEVER YOUR NATIVE LANGUAGE IS!INDIRECTCONTRAST
@indirect contrast:
I am honored, more humbled to hear your beautiful words, My English is not better than yours, or we r the same at least.
I love your poems.
Enjoy your talent and welcome back. 😉
Very passionately said!
10Q, Secret Agent Woman.
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lovely post dear, full of imagery, be careful fire burns xx great post xx
William:
I appreciate your kind words. 😉
can’t wait for thursday
JP:
Can u tell me why do u like Thursday Poets’ Rally?
I am thrilled about your excitement of our weekly rally.
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Like a baptism of fire.
Excellent.
i got a poem ready for thursday.
cant wait
Wow,
Kseverny,
Glad to have u in for week 6.
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to stand in that fire..what sweet burn…
Brian:
thank U for the fire of friendliness.
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Dearest Jingle,
Burn baby , burn!
Great job.
I felt like that a lot nowadays!
Remember this video?
Got to go for my walks.
hugs
shakira
Shakira:
Awesome video,
10q for sharing.
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I agree, creative fire feeds our souls and cannot be stopped. And as you say, feeds us in unexpected ways.
I think one of these Thursdays I must take up your poet’s challenge week!
Disco Inferno, what a fun song, I’ve not heard in a loooong time!
Dear Jannie:
U R welcome to our Thursday Rally any week,
post a poem,
visit 12 blogs with your unique and beautiful comments,
u rock!
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I can see this in my head and imagine it so vivid. Thanks for your words, 🙂
Doraz:
thank U for reading my work.
Glad to see you smile,
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Wonderful writing, Jingle! You beautifully describe that feeling of getting a great idea and going with it!
CottageGirl:
I feel good about your goodwill toward my poem.
love u for being nice, 😉
J this is blazing and brilliant!
Jamie:
U R blazing and brilliant when u come to my place.
I value your point of view very much. 😉
OH!!! HEYYYYY! I met Your room lastnight! Dopey me! This whole poetry thing is amazing. I’m crazy busy right now so can’t play, but
IIIII LLLOOOOVVVEEEE Your poem. It’s wonderful. If I hit a creative block, I’m coming here and re-reading it!!!
Thank You and Cheers and Namaste. 🙂
Dear Blissbait:
U Brighten my day with your perfect or unbeatbale comments. what a blessing to have u join me.
😉 😉
Magnificent poem again, my dear friend.
The fire is one of the elements from the nature 😉 I like how you describe it in your poem and how you succeed to transmit us emotions only through words.
Thank you for share it again, Jingle! 🙂
Have a magnificent day! 😉 🙂
Dear Alina:
U Always bring sunshine and sweetness to me.
How clever and kind u r. 😉
U have outstanding ability expressing your feelings or reactions to the work of others.
Cool ;).
wishing u the most beautiful day ahead.
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Thank you, my friend!
It’s a pleasure for me to read your post daily. It makes me think at many things then and I appreciate the work you’ve done it too 🙂
Have a special day, Jingle!
Alina:
U R so kind and open minded,
I am impressed and blessed to have u around.
U truly inspire me!
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I like this poem a lot…it’s an excellent description.
Dear Tony:
Nothing is like your beautiful Haiku in your blog.
I feel fuller when u come here.
see u again, 😉
Love the part about the creative fire having no patience. I feel that fire all the time.
wow,
it is a treat to see u in, @catgirlslovehaiku,
hope that u enjoy the visit.
😉