You take a hard road,
I sip the tears your eyes try to hold.
You drink a bottle of wine,
I finish what is undone.
Your eyes are red,
I help you go to bed.
Through evening’s rest, you dream,
I try to silent you when you scream.
You wake up often,
You cry;
I listen,
I stay nearby.
When you eventually have the clue
of what you shall do,
I leave
With a sign of relief.
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Hello, This is a work of fiction, trying to capture a writer’s block.
And for Thursday Poets Rally!
I want to say thank you to Suzi, Pravin nair for their kind nominations,
Referring to The Perfect Poet Award Week 14, which Jingle accepts here.
For week 15, Jingle wish to nominate Brian Waystationone!
Have FUN, everyone!
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The Perfect Poet Award week 14
Jingle Nozelar 
hey… nice one ;)… gud job buddy… 🙂 Check my latest poem “MY LITTLE DOG”
http://www.direktdilze.wordpress.com
phalgunn your blog doesnot usually opens 😦
i read and loved the blog.
a beautiful verse…i was intially thinking of consoling an indecisive lover but that too would play with the muse and how she is so fleeting at times. thank you as well for the nomination.
my nominee is leslie over at moondust…
Brian:
thank you for the encouragement,
of course,
love and passion come in first…
I appreciate your kind take on my writings!
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wow writers block, u are kiddin right, u are producing some fine works, congrats to brian, my post will be on THURSDAY the day of the rally xx
clever William!
The heart of friendship is alive and well.
True!
Your poem is lovely Jingle.
Nice, viola!
What a great poem you have up there. A comforter with nothing more attached. Lovely.
your blog too refuses to open.
Very intense and at the same time precise.
Like your style.
Ana:
sweet you.
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a lovely poem jingle.It’s really great to take care of people when they are in a bad situation.well done jingle.
kind wordwand,
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Count me in and instead of whats coming out on thursday i would like to use my poem distrust for it works better for the theme you are after. thank you,
http://shoelessboywonder.wordpress.com/2010/04/19/distrust/#comments
You did a good job with your poem as well nice to see a redder side of ya 🙂 😛
10Q!
Hi Jingle :)! I can relate to what you wrote and I think it is expressed in a simple, yet sophisticated way. Your choice of words, the poem’s form. I really enjoyed it.
Neat!
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I know that feeling well!
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Kris!
Yes, cajoling your muse to manoeuvre around writer’s block is nicely painted in your verse.
I like this …
smart, Julie!
i’ve been suffering from a HUGE case of writer’s block lately. you’ve captured it well.
Good Luck,
Jaime!
Jingle, this is awesome. I love the way you so creatively and richly portrayed it. Love it. I just posted and am going to start visitng fresh poets first then on to the others!
Thank you,
suzi!
you sweet friend,
blessing for you,
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Hi ji,
Nice poem u have here… loved to come back to read your post after 2 long weeks… i noticed u changed your template it looks more profound!!! i like it. 🙂 keep coming with such beautiful creative poems n posts.
Luv
Dudo
http://www.dudoism.blogspot.com
Hi ji,
it feels nice to come back again after a long time and read your wonderful poems. i loved it!!!! n i noticed you changed you template it looks more profound and attractive i loved it,
Keep writing
lov
DuDo
Nice of you!
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A beautiful poem. You have a really unique writing style.
Ok, Jingle, I’ve visited and commented on twelve fresh poets, and will hit more fresh and the others tomorrow.
thumbs up!
See you next week, Suzi!
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Writer’s block hurts.
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Oh J, your writing is always so thought provoking and this one, so intense. What a pleasure to stop in and read.
Jamie:
kind remarks,
you nice girl!
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When you eventually have the clue
of what you shall do,
I leave
With a sign of relief.
Nice take on the theme 🙂
Nanc:
you cool friend,
thank you for the positive take…
JK Rowling writes Harry Potter, does Harry have anything to do with JK herself?
I am curious about people who takes others’ work too personally…
thank you for the kindness!
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I could see you in this one giving the love and support out. 🙂 Nicely written Jingle. 🙂
Doraz:
you kind girl,
love you!
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I was worried for awhile, you ok?
This is just about writer’s block?
you take care of yourself, Jingle.
you are spending too long hours on the computer?
hugs
shakira
your blog has gone back to its naughty self- is not opening any more. 😦
what do you mean?
worry no more,
I am perfectly fine!
how do you know I spend much time on computer?
you guessing, right?
10Q.
Happy Day!
Nice. Loved your poem. Lots of love and understanding there. 🙂 Well done/ Jo.
10Q.
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I like this!!! Mine with this subject is called “Wasted” 🙂
Nice of you.
Just lovely. very beautiful- and very true love. but why leave?
Congratulations for the award! you first of all deserve it every week 🙂
Trisha, you sweet pie!
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“You take a hard road,
I sip the tears your eyes try to hold.”
Great opening!
BFG:
10q,
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absolutely great opening. and the images fall gently like petals. nice work!
sweet you,
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Lovely poem Jingle..keep the fire burning!
10q,
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Hi Jingle, I saw your link on ksverney. I would love to participate, but I am having a duh moment. HELP! How can I participate???
post a poem,
link back to comment and let me know with your link included,
then visit and comment for 12 participants in my list of week 15…
welcome in…
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Thank you. My poem is posted. I feel at home already.
http://www.cadence4life.wordpress.com
Oh my! You express this so well. The idea of babysitting, of hovering over myself, until the words choose me again — I thought that was just me 🙂 A relief indeed!
I made it to Thursday…yay! LOL
Beautiful poem Ji..as always ♥
Kathy,
Sweet of you.
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Wow, this one really speaks to me. Very emotional and deep.
Thank you for sharing your heart and words, Jingle.
xo
Sweet,
Jannie!
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Very emotional, Jingle. The muse is often very fickle and hard to win over to one’s side.
Patti:
thanks!
That writer’s block has a way of allowing some beautiful things to come forth.
Love you Ji
thanks!