You may let me down on purpose
With your bitter or ill logics.
You may dislike me, I suppose,
But, like the air, I rise.
Does my frankness upset you?
Do you enjoy seeing me miserable?
Does my background offend you?
Do you prefer me to being less able?
You may attack me with your words,
You may chop me with your eyes,
You may kill me with your anger,
But, like air, I rise.
Does my gender blind you?
Does my friendliness bore you?
Does it come as a surprise
That I always find a way to rise?
Leaving behind moments of doubts and fears,
Do a shift in gears.
I carry the dreams of my ancestors,
I rise, NO surprise.
*****
Hello, How are you?
A writer or poet shall be able to go beyond one’s experieces
and write about almost anything in life…I am trying!
Happy Saturday to You All!
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You Make My Life full of Energy (click on the image to see it move ;))
I Value Your Friendship!
Open up in Soul and feel well Aware
It is outside yourself that is only there
For what you know is what is best
Energy within lasts but outside is at rest
Keep moving forward on the journey which is here
Remembering your Soul as it is always near
enjoy Jingle and Happy Saturday to you and your Soul is always your best friend first..thanks for being mine(+_
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Thank you, my friend!
your words touch me!
Very angry poem. wonderfully written.
happy weekend!
Trisha:
I am not angry right now, I always let go and have peace. I write the poem from the view of an angry person, which does make readers feel like that way.
Thank you for the feedback!
you portrayed anger very perfectly. a wonderfully written poem.
You inspired me– and this spontaneous villanelle came out! Since I am still exploring the form it surprised me. I dedicate it to you– Happy Mother’s Day!
—
and if like the air I rise
despite your expectation
it should come as no surprise
it’s worth unlimited tries
to feel this exultation
and if like the air I rise
over all that I despise
the trials the tribulation
it should come as no surprise
just look straight into my eyes
to see determination
and if like the air I rise
you have not won time denies
you final jubilation
it should come as no surprise
hope vanquished still seldom dies
so we reach culmination
and if like the air I rise
it should come as no surprise
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http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/
Hello,
I am surprised that you write a poem based on my post.
Glad that it inspires you. Everyone has some moments in life that negativity hits us and makes us wonder why and how…
Happy Mother’s Day to You!
I recall you have a son, I have two boys, we share something in common!
Very interesting poem. I enjoyed reading it 🙂
Thom:
Thanks!
😉
loved the tone of the poem… very inspiring one too…
well written…
Raj:
Welcome in,
How sweet to see you.
😉
Nice and inspiring.
Thanks a lot!
No surprise:
You do rise!
Glad to be back
Aloha from Hawaii
Comfort Spiral
Hello,
you are so very kind to me,
Happy Saturday!
😉
rise above it all
dont let it drag you down
cause if you do
they win.
smiles.
Brian:
I treasure your support.
I never actually spend time being angry or upset…YES, there are people who are out there working hard to drag people down…
I am thrilled that YOU are one of those who lift people up!
Your kind remarks appear very precious!
😉
Ah…Jingle…this poem was a bit of a surprise to me in its tone…so well done…just loved it!
Martin:
Happy Saturday!
Thank you for the good intention!
😉
take care.
loved that poem, was beautiful, u have a broad mind for words and it always fascinates me xxx
I agree – beautifully done and strongly executed!!
Love and Happy Mother’s Day
I love this poem. I can really relate to it and it just has so much emotion behind it. Nice job!! 🙂
Excellent job in penning this poem with feelings and emotions flowing all through each lines.
“Frankness” does never upset me, so long as it is the frank TRUTH. So that’s why some say, “The truth will set you free”.
Your blogs are amazingly well thought and written. Thank you.
P.S. I did not think you are the angry one. I write a poem (I’m new at that) it is not necessarily about me!
a strong poem , well written jingle.
Hi Jingle!
I rise….to applaud ur poem 🙂
nice n inspiring really good stuff!
I always expect the best from you Jingle, it’s just who you are, amazing