Rain is 17,
She has fears.
Her monthly friend did not come for two weeks now,
She binged with a guy two months ago at a friend’s party,
He offered her a drink that was cool and sweet,
Then she did not recall what happened next,
She woke up in her friend’s bed next morning…
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Write a story in 55 words. Give it a try and notify G-man
I used web tool to count my writing which is exactly 55 words… WORDCALCULATOR
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This is 100% FICTION.
Teen pregnancy or unprepared pregnancy are common all over the world.
The issue is complex and Jingle is glad that “No Dating Is Allowed in her High School”.
Hope that you have fun reading it.
Happy Friday!
😉 😉 😉
Jingle Nozelar 
It happens a lot indeed.. Once again, very well written!
Have a great weekend!
🙂
Desire:
I expect you to accept the perfect poet award,
please at least nominate one poet for me after you read this response!
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You are good at writing stories and poems with limit words. Nicely done.
Viola:
you are kind!
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very well done.. i like it 🙂 makes perfect sense and perfect example for everyone 😀
10Q,
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Very well done, Jingle. No dating in your children’s high school huh? VERY COOL!
no dating is allowed in my high school,
that is a long time ago, during 1986…
thanks for dropping by.
Teen pregnancy is an important issue. Good job!
Felicitas:
Thank you for the kind remarks!
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A Public Service 55!!
Brought to you by Jingle..
Excellent 55 My Friend.
Thanks for playing, thanks for visiting, and have a Kick Ass Week-End…
Galen
What a surprise, G-Man!
Jingle is honored to have you in!
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Wishing you a beautiful evening!
oh wow…scary story…all too real. mix teen angst wiht alcohol and a bed…yikes. hope she talks to someone instead of trying to fogure it out on her own.
Brian:
It is a fiction,
But I am not sure how people handle this in reality…
thanks for stopping by.
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you made a story in 55 words that had me wondering what was happening next. Great writing
Gerardine
I added a 55 words for flash Friday, it was fun.
Gerardine
10Q for following, Gerardine!
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A storm is brewing at Rain’s house, I am sure of that.
True!
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Much intensity in a few words. Really packed a punch J.
Nice to see you, Jamie!
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The binge….oh no.
It happens all too often.
Loved your 55.
Sunrise in the City —as always, scroll down below my Show n Tell. Hope you’re having a terrific Friday!!!
Wow,
it is kind of you,
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Very common I suppose. I can’t see a ‘no dating’ policy at a High School actually working though. Maybe a lot more education and some common sense instilled earlier on.
Sheila:
You are right!
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Very nice post Jingle.
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Just a single word….Awesome!!
Pamela:
you kind angel!
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these days its really very tough to save children, even when we have brought them up with best level of common sense.
i often feel happy that i dont have a daughter though i would have always preferred a daughter than a son.
Trisha:
I understand your point of view!
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55 words!!!! this is nice……what I’m I hearing ‘no dating in high sch’, it really can’t work…
Welcome in,
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a five-star 55-word-story poem , well done Jingle.
Wordwand:
5 star makes me happy!
you make my day!
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Fiction, but this sort of thing happens a lot. Our young people really need to be careful.
Great 55.
Peter:
Yes, I read news and other literature,
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Oops I forgot, did it matter? Late for me, this week, what with work demanding I do what I’m paid to do. I mean, what a cheek. My 55 story here
John:
Nice to read you and see you around.
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Excellent “make you think twice” post!
Polly:
you are cute!
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Accountability- learned a day too late.
Well said, Ji.
You are kind,
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Let’s see if this is 55:
Love comes unexpectedly. To the young, the unprepared, the casual let’s see what life brings.
Like the wetness in the morning after rain, she found herself in a deep damp place. Alone, next to the boy she’d just met, the father of her unborn child. She pulls the covers over her head and hardly breathes.
DMR
http://davidhrheins.blogspot.com
glad you tried and had fun!
David,
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I had so much fun with this, i wrote it as a poem:
http://bit.ly/buKnGa
i will hop over in a minute!
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Jingle…
Party at Starla’s.
Come on over.
Montana is beautiful
🙂
Yes, Happy Friday,
Doraz!
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perfect 55, very well written, loved it xx
Perfect William,
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Excellent 55 my friend. Sometimes big mistakes like that do happen. How silly now days with all the protection there is. 🙂 Have a great weekend 🙂
Thom:
nice to see you in,
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That’s very true and very well written. Unfortunately teens will find a way to have sex if they really want to. Nice job Ji 😀
Kathy:
Thank you,
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No dating until 21 is a very very good idea!!
Beautiful honest poem to raise awareness.
xoxo
from
Jannie
xoox
Very well written and on an extremely important topic, at that!
thanks a lot!
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A sad story that plays out all too often.
There is no dating allowed in your high school? How in the world do they enforce that?
My 55 is up here.
Patti,
u r very kind!
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opps.. people certainly need to be more careful
I know its late but my 55 is up
thank you for the visit.
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