You, She, I, Excuse Me and Good Bye

You were our friend,
Things came to an end,
Because, something I “offend”.
I was waiting outside the door,
But she jumped over the floor
and went to see you, I saw.
After she’s gone,
I came in
and you asked me to leave you alone.
You, She, I,
You chose her,
I know why.

Write a poem, or a short story  in 55 words. Give it a try and notify  G-man

Poetry Potluck at Jingle Poetry

35 thoughts on “You, She, I, Excuse Me and Good Bye

  1. Xcellent link Jingle.

    I love the way you aren’t afraid of any writing challenges!

    X all by itself is tough…and that little controlled poem.

    Very neat!

    Thanks for an Xcellent link!


  2. Ah, love triangles…. Definitely sounds a lot like my brother’s love life. He’s always the one getting the short end of the stick though 😦

  3. … and it’s still a good one second time around (the test of a poem). Well done and happy Potluck, Ji.

    Sent you an email. Let me know about next Sunday. Want to make sure you are covered. Hugs!

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