Spring sun simmers the afternoon air,
Tickling breeze makes curious stir.
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Wild ducks fool around side by side,
Leaving overlapped water rings beside.
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Set a mellow yellow flower petal in to make a splash,
Pick some wild berries home, no need cash.
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Hear the train whistling by,
Take a photo shot and happily sigh.
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Walk along the half-remembered path by the canal home,
Sum up the courage to share this poem.
Cloaked Monk: (Courage )
lovely simply lovely poem
“Leaving overlapped water rings” I like that image.
Nicely written. thanks for sharing.
Beautiful 😛
Loved the sweet notes of this poem 😀
What simple pleasures, what beautiful memories, what lost times recalled. Well done.
Lovely Poem
Beautifully scenes painted here Jingle and lovely expressions giving wonderful imagery!!
beautiful and playful jingle. enjoyed it very much.
trisha
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Nicely done, and I love the top image … thank you for sharing … becca
Cute 🙂
This is wonderful. Well done!
‘set a mellow yellow flower petal in to make a splash’ what a wonderful image..like your poem..a gentle yet hearty splash of remembering being young..Jae
Thanks for sharing this sweet poem.
Simply beautiful.
Jingle this is just simply beautiful, and I enjoyed reading it. I do pray that you are fine and doing well. Hugs Viola
Simple but beautiful poem. Thanks for the nice comment.
Thank you Jingle…courage is such a wonderful word sharing the beauty of life with all….blessings…bkm
Lovely poem
A lovely post! I’m happy you shared your beautiful poem;o)
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Such a lovely poem; thanks for sharing.
Sometimes, only a few words are all you need to say so much.
Thank you for posting this.
beautiful painting through words…
very nice jingle – does it take that much courage?
Lovely. I especially liked the mellow yellow flower petal ,)
I felt very warm reading this dear, superb as always xx
Lovely poem! So many images that appeal to different senses: sight, sound, smell, touch.
Best wishes,
Anna
Anna’s Monday’s Child # 37
Simple pleasures and sweet sharing.
very very well-captured images! perfect!
very very well-captured imagery!
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