He cries
4 French fries,
She spends
Hours
With Friends
Watering flowers,
U sat still
On a hill,
I gaze
At trees
In breeze,
We love to stay
A day
Near the bay.
*****
What can you say in 160 characters? (spaces included)
Check it out on Monkey Man.
This is linked to Poetry Pantry at Poets United
Doni who had a birthday on August 10, 2010
http://divisoria.wordpress.com/2010/08/10/happy-birthday/
Amrita who had a birthday on August19, 2010
http://amritaghosh.wordpress.com/2010/08/20/a-birthday-haiku/
Happy Belated Birthdays 2 Both of U, Sorry 4 missing it…
Happy Birthday Wishes to All August Babies here:
http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/08/pink-birthday-wishes-4-august-babies.html
hey jingle, thank you soooo much 🙂 my b’day was actually on the 19th 🙂
very cool post dear, many happy returns to your friends xx
These days I can’t even think of ten words to write, but I am sure it will get better soon. Love your post.
That’s a happy and refreshing 160 poem.
Hi Jingle, thanks for the warm welcome and Happy belated birthday to your friends 🙂
Wonderful post Ji, and happy birthday to all. Have a happy day!:)
Sometimes I cry for french fries too. The one here at Patsy’s Cafe are the best in Austin!!
xo
Nice post Jingle 🙂
and thanks for leaving this link in my blog.
I have wished them both in the posts 🙂
cool you,
😉
Thx for visiting my blog – been busy with visitors, work and garden … no time to write or even read much … will keep checking & try to join in again soon 🙂
You are all awesome writers, especially you Jingle 😉 and so prolific, I feel inadequate… but I’ll get over it!
A shoort cute 160.. though I can never express myself in so few characters..
Thanks for visiting my blog… If you liked it, do visit again..
Wow – Jingle – are these photos your own? They are really excellent – I especially love the photo of the tree – it’s perfect!!! 😀 xx
You caught me right before breakfast. Normally I’d be all over trees in the breeze, but right now all I want is the French fries.
French fries are off limits until further notice…for me anyway. But I would love to spend a day by the bay. That sounds like fun!
Lovely pictures too!
http://harrischanningauthor.blogspot.com/2010/08/sunday-160_22.html
happy birthday doni and amrita. may god bless you with love, happiness and success.
marvelous poem jingle. a fresh breeze from woods and trees. 🙂
A day spent by the bay, ocean, or lakeside…all luxurious and calming.
It’s Brian Miller’s birthday today! Best wishes to all who celebrated this week.
Sounds like an idyllic spot. Much better than the rain I see outside my window.
Happy birthday to everyone. I’m adding Brian to the list too. Happy birthday, Brian!
ah!!! 🙂 simple and sophisticated ^_^
good writing 😀
Wonderful 160 Jingle.. and as always, very thoughtful of you to think of everybody 🙂 You rock..!!
Sounds like lovely ways to spend a day!
This is so beautiful, Jingle. LOVE it!!
I liked ….I gaze at trees in breeze…just lovely and a great 160! Happy birthday to Doni, Amrita and all who are born in August! I celebrate you! Heartspell 🙂
Jingle, here is an award for you. Only for you.
Kindness. Fellowship
All embracing Friendship
The broken, remedied
The forgotten, carried
The good, a kind deed
I award you your own,
Ladyship.
You deserve it.
And your charming poetry? Lovely.
u r soooooooooooooooo very charming….
I don’t deserve it,
but I highly appreciate IT!
thanks a ton!
🙂
What a fun 160 and you are so kind to recognize all of those bloggers. Well done, Jingle. Thanks for playing.
oh – a day at the bay would be nice….nice 160 Jingle!
What a fascinating and peaceful poem, Jingle!
Very nice, Jingle!
I envy your ability to say a lot in few characters. I seem to need three pages:) A good jingle by Jingle!
Wonderful post, Jingle! =)
-Weasel
Beautiful photos Jingle! And fun words!
And I wanted to specifically thank you for voting for me and the compliments on my sidebar pic. I’m actually surprised you notice these things, lol. I didn’t think that anyone ever paid attention to the sidebar! lol. Although I do believe Jannie is on top of things as well. :o)
160 characters? Yours are wonderful Ji, will check the link out 🙂
Different people, different ways to relax… but all having fun indeed…
I went on a drive on a rainy evening… that too was lovely..
A very nice and cheery poem, Jingle… refreshing, like a breath of fresh air!!! 🙂
Great poem Jingle! And belated happy birthday to all!
beautiful pictures and a great worded 160 cheers pete
Happy Belated Birthday Doni xx
Happy Belated Birthday Amrita xx
Best wishes.. Have fun 🙂
Jingle this is a charming and lovely poem. I love it! 🙂
Happy Birthday everyone!!!!!!!!!!!
P.S. My birthday is August 31 🙂
we will celebrate on the day,
😉
A+ would read again