Thursday Poet’s Rally Week 47, share a free verse or any form of poetry with poets rally….have fun!
I dream of being seen
as the evergreen
as I stand at the edge of your yard,
with my best regard.
that way,
I’ll stay
awake, with no rest
as light of the sun dies in the west.
I’d never turn brown
Even if you forget about watering me
While being out of town.
It has been a while when I formally take an award,
This award is given to me by a fellow poet, appreciate it.
I wish to nominate
For The Perfect Poet Award Week 48…
Jingle Nozelar 
A cute little jingle there, Jingle! I like it.
(I received no emails regarding this weeks rally. Sup wit dat?)
This is a nice poem, I like it 🙂
nice! i very much like the ending
I especially like “as I stand at the edge of your yard,
with my best regard”.
Definitely a cutie today!
Lovely! .. Love evergreens, even in winter you can still see the life. Very nice piece Ji.
What an inspiring poem…great thoughts from the evergreen…great writing.
☮ Siggi in Downeast Maine, USA
Fun and light, I really enjoyed this one!
Whimsical write of the evergreen, much enjoyed! ~ Rose
always green, always alive…no time to be dormant. Good poem!
Wonderful. I love evergreens, especially the fact that they are tough.
The beauty of the evergreen portrayed well in these lines.
Cute poem, if only all grass had such thoughts! Well written!
Ah the evergreen..such a stately tree so protecting and wise, Congrats on your Award and Thank you for all you do. We all feel your protection and wisdom abundantly.
words given to even the silent 🙂
Fun post … it is fun to accept awards – you should do so more often. You are an inspiration and a “cheerleader” for all of us to do our best … thank you! \\(^o^)//
a short and simple jingle..enjoyed it
sometimes we do frget to watre those plants 🙂 i loved this…
evergreen and optimistic!
Ode to an evergreen…love this! We often overlook it since it does not need our attention….good job for giving it props in your words!
lovely …..like a good friendship always there ..thanks for sharing
A good wish. Optimistic and hopeful. I like it. 🙂
splendid poem jingle. very, very beautiful.
Beautiful as always and the great feel of freedom! 😀
Nice sentiment in here. Really enjoyed Jingle, thanks:)
The staid tree, ever strong, ever growing, representing so many positive human qualities… nice!
It would be nice to be able to thrive without any nourishment at all! Nice poem!
congrats on your award. love the analogy in your verse.
Evergreen??
That’s cool!! I too would be happy to be seen and thought of as “Evergreen”!!
Well expressed bro!!
with warm regards
Another Author
yaayyy!! thank you for nominating me…. That’s my honor 😀
and congratulation on your award.. 🙂
A very appealing jingle with a lot of good things in it: fine phrases and images.
nice work ! 🙂
Very cool write – Loved the underlying faithfulness you placed into it!
This is beautiful Jingle, another favorite by you. Congrats on your well-deserved award!
Very cool Jingle! Glad to visit.
This is so sweet… and kind of sad also…
Love the imagery of the evergreen- ever aware, present, alive – lovely
I have a message saved on my phone say, trees have souls, a friend said this as comfort the day my landlord cut down the mulberry tree I had been sculpting for three years…….I should have tried an evergreen!
Yay! A plant with full staying power….! Unlike some I’ve looked after! Wonderfully Jingled…!
This is enchanting and magic poem To be see as an evergreen. To live a very long time as you watch the world pass by. Wonderful words.
Melanie
I had fun reading your poem. Great write!
Love it! Beautiful imagination.
So simple, strong and beautiful. (The tree and your poem).:-)
Nice poem about fresh, vibrant and evergreen nature :))
Nice. I want more of those that do not turn brown.
Nice poetic wish
Wonderful poem and thank you so much for the nomination, you are awesome!
To be seen, perhaps we need to be the last one standing. Always the ones at the sides are usually neglected and the center gets all th atention, hence maybe why not stand in the centre to get all the attention?
Having lived through a lot of drought–and having lost a spruce–I know hat you mean
Brilliant rhyme in this Ji, really gave it a lovely flow. Oddly bought a smile to my eye.
The Lonely Recluse.
this is truely truely awesome… so much love and your insight for the post speaks a gr8 deal about you too… my first read of the day… and you amde me thrilled….
jz mindblowing….
This poem is nice. To me this may also mean a person being left by a love one who’s going away for a while.
I hope your dream comes true, Jingle.
Evergreen’s can bring light into your life even in the depths of the darkest winter. Love it 🙂
The perseverance of the tree. I love the sentiment. =)
Lovely poem! Forever living ever greens, beautiful and light hearted.
Lovely poem Jingle… loved the use of the evergreen… 🙂
this is wonderful! great use of imagery xxx
Ah, the song of the Evergreen. A wonderful, delightful write Jingle!
Nice, I hear that, 🙂 I am like a cedar tree they say, Thank you, much appreciated, WS
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