Life is an illusion!
A silly decision
can lead to wrong conclusion,
which is the opposite of satisfaction
and an ugly distraction.
come along,
let’s move on.
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Poetry Potluck Week 41,
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Monkey Man‘s Sunday 160
Good use of words.
I’ve said before that I usually don’t like exclamation marks used in poetry, but it works wonderfully in this. A serious subject (to me, anyway) written in a light, playful manner. I really like it 🙂
If it’s meant to work It will. Nice write.
Sometimes moving on is the best policy. Thanks for playing along with the Sunday 160.
I wonder how many silly decisions have led me here.
That’s my motu proprio! 🙂
Flow and words….awe-inspiring!! Truth of life, isn’t it?
We live, we learn.
Wonderful write Jingle
wonderful Ji..
Someone is Special
Always a hard decision– nicely written!
I agree, the best thing to do is just move on. We so often think, at the moment, how important something is and so do not even remember it. I like this, Jingle. Hugs, pat
Very interesting! Never thought of life as an illusion I agree it’s always best to move on. Thanks you for sharing.
yes, so true … beautiful work, jingle 🙂
When I don’t like the reality I wish it was an illusion. Very well written and much to think about.
Oh so good use of those words Ji! Great one!
very wise and true jingle.
This is wonderful I love the flow!
Wow great ion-ism need lots of concentration else loose the attention leading to confusion..~:). tQ.
Gotta love a good wordplay… Especially with words like these.
I love this Jingle. It is simple in it´s structure and expression but holds an important message. Cheers!