Hyde Park Thursday Poets Rally Week 73 (September 20 – September 26, 2012)
Short Story Slam Week 27: Locations and Sensations
If I say autumn,
write the phrase “polar bear”,
attach it to the snow owl,
and send it to your mailbox,
then, when you unfold the paper
and swallow my words,
you will feel full
and shall taste how much,
Just how deep I love you,
in the past, in the presence,
and in the future.
if you are a poet, i invite you to join poets rally today.
I like the line: you will feel full.
Lovely words !
I felt them so much ..
Nice look and name you gave yourself 😉
well,
you may be in a rush when write this, but it does make a lovely point.
keep it up.
😉
short and well rounded.
well put…
🙂
awesome metaphor.
lovely lines!
A few simple words showing the passion of loving another. wonderful
Wow this is great, super original and really hits the reader with the conviction of true love.
This is just beautiful. It’s so different. Lovely words 🙂
beautiful poem filled with emotion!
nice 🙂
autumn is a beautiful time of year, loved this short but heady poem x
wow, so vivid!
very nice.
You took me away to some other world. 🙂