shopping for confidence,
through the bubbles of a fish,
we gamble and sense
magic and fantasy in a flash,
it’s like taste a big piece of cheese
by looking at an online dish,
we transfer and traverse,
number digits into the sixth dimensional cash:
I cannot see what you see,
I cannot agree with what you pursuit,
I’m distinct and discrete
and I follow my common sense.
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this is awesome,
love the imagery of common senses.
well done sixth sense poetry.
powerful stuff.
love the carefully composed lines.
I´m curious to know what prompted this poem? ❤
it says something in a lower key, somewhat everyone wishes for, but not all get it:
confidence, success, fame, money, and love…
agree?
people writes whatever comes to mind,
thanks!
love this one….abstract imagery….
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wonderfully poetic.
what a take on life’s other side.
Original similes & metaphors. Nicely done.
excellent…
😉
wonderful thoughts…
have an awesome valentine!
charming sentiments there,
best.
I loved the way the imagery and lines of flow intersected to create the point
For some it’s common sense while for other it’s just expense.
excellent!…