Berry creek,
Pink Cheek,
Running,
real quick.
.
A cute dog,
A lovely woman,
Two biking girls do self talk,
Their spirits are zen.
.
Baseball field,
Kid’s playground,
Crowds wailed.
Balls making cracking sound.
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Rocky plates,
Watchful eyes,
A++ playmates,
“A home run”, someone cries.
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Awwww…. Jingles I love your poem today. Brought back memories of all my A++ Playmates.
Lovely snapshots of summer in words.
A home run of a story
ROG, ABC Wednesday team
I’d give this an A+++
Love seeing your A+++ playmates.
such imagery you paint
I loved the poem, specially the first few lines. Had a little bit of tongue twister 🙂
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lovely!
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A homerun is always a thrill.
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Nice and playful, as your words usually are… Lovely playmates!
Home run is always good
Pheno, ABC Wednesday Team
Always so lighty and lovely Jingle 🙂 And, a pleasure to read.
“Their spirits are zen” I love this line awesome poem very charming
I love catchy jingles.
Thanks for the sweet read.
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