Short Story slam Week 5
http://bluebellbooks.blogspot.com/2011/07/thursday-short-story-slam-week-5.html
School is over, time for summer vacation.
Mom had made a decision,
I must stay at my grandma’s house,
where I have no way to use a computer mouse.
I refused to eat,
But starved to death without drink/meat;
Eventually, I admit,
I have to get used to country living indeed.
I drink tomato soup with egg drops,
I eat wheat sandwiches with lettuces, no soda pops,
I pluck eggplants and milk cows,
I collect eggs and listen to cats’ meows …
Mornings content No traffic noises at all,
But the roosters’ call,
But that’s Not all.
Free from internet,
No more text messages or online chats,
My life has turned 180 degrees you bet,
I find myself in love with chickens and cats…
Breathing the freshest air in the vegetable garden,
I feel like living in HEAVEN, I beg your pardon.
Grandma’s stories make me learn,
Knowledge is something priceless to earn;
The seed for growth is sowed,
as this story is told.
As I show off my own little tree,
I see the pride in the eyes of my Mom, Hurray!!!
Lovely simplicity, Jingle!
Amazing jingle ! That’s really superb one…THanks for sharing 🙂
That sounds wonderful I’d love to spend some time away from technology, eating fresh food =)
i would like to stay on a farm, fresh air through your brain would clear out all the clogging of the city life.
OMGoodness no internet!!! That would drive me crazy!!! Lovely story though….lol
Love the story in this one…something many children should experience.;-)
aw, wonderful story-telling!
I think you are lucky to see pride in the eyes of your mother… I think that is something everyone wants, deep down
As a country girl who now lives in a small town I can really relate to this …..I loved the whole poem and thought the ending great, it gave a great message that many kids need to be reminded off ..thank you for sharing
great story….
Makes for a sweet memory of smipler tmes
Blessingds
A simple message conveyed about the beauty and value of a simple , uncluttered , technology-free lifestyle ! All kids should have such an experience at least once in a lifetime !
amazing poem ,, loved your style 🙂
Simply wonderful! Loved it!
Thanks for sharing;o)
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Have a nice and happy week****
I wish we had a country home to escape to! I think my daughter would wither away without her internet (although I must admit, I might also!)
what an unforgettable vacation for that girl…
I like it when you brought about the life of country girl in a small village…
This line is cool: ‘I must stay at my grandma’s house, where I have no way to use a computer mouse…’
my grandmother’s home was a prison to me. i hated it but i was sent there for atleast a fortnight every summer!
It’s kind of fable based on fact. somewhat real, somewhat legend but, that is supposedly the origins of the expression, this too, shall pass. It was inscripted in a rong for the king but, I just added the archway as a bit more of a read to the fantasy….lol Glad you enjoyed it.
truly lovely ~ the words, the sentiment, the imagery! ♥
Sweet!
I love tomato-egg-drop soup too!
Good luck ithe this shot-story slam, Ji.
Happy days …