Jenny Matlocks: Saturday Centus
Saturday Writing Prompt: within the stone
linked to poetry potluck week 40
Poetry Potluck at Jingle Poetry
It’s magic time,
Time to walk through the wall
and vanish with clinched jaw.
.
Within the stone,
You start to lick your wound
and heal without hearing any sound.
.
Within the stone,
You forget about yourself
and become as innocent as an elf.
.
Within the stone,
You reach satisfaction
Without any distraction.
.
Within the stone,
You rise above
as everything around you is pure love.
.
Within the stone,
your muses fly
and emotions go up high.
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Haven’t seen the movie but from what I can gather this is a fine poem to go with it…Cheers!
Pretty cool, Jingle!
=)
I love this. That’s a great use of the prompt . It has all the magical qualities of the series. Very nice and creative!
I love the cadence of this piece! It is truly magic.
Namaste……….cj
PS – Thanks for reading my piece and offering you kind comment!
You have captured the magic,
that is deep within the stone,
You have found the essence,
that is yours, and yours alone,
You have put the prompt to use,
found the magic within the stone,
You must wisely use the power,
that is yours, and yours alone.
You have the power, Ji, very well done!
I loved the Harry Potter series! Great work, Jingle!
Its only when I read poetry that I realise how much I like it . Never pick a poetry book up tho thanks for visit
My young teen loved reading the harry Potter books, and the movies too. She’s on tenterhooks right now waiting for the part two of the last one~!
Loved the imagery in this Ji !
A – B – R – A – C – A – D – A – B – R – A
Love your magic poetry within the stone. Awesome. tQ.
what a beautiful poem for potter. loved it.
May be …
Within stone is our life
For we never realize
And when the time comes
For us to come out of stone
We would have crossed the stage of youth!
Beautiful stone Jingle…
no stone unturned t
to find the last one
to keep the fires burning
the souls of lost, innocent lives.
Enjoyed this.
Wonderful poetry!! Well done!! Peace and blessings
I haven’t seen the movies either but it is a lovely poem I really enjoy the use of stone
I thought I commented just now but I don’t see it. Great job Jingle I really love the repetition of “Within the stone”
Terrific write, Jingle! I love Harry!
Nice take Jingle…very creative 🙂
What beauty shines forth from this..a pleasure..in the heart of the stone!!
The magic here repeats and repeats. Very strong yet winsome ….. super job!!!!
Magical stones, oh if there were!
I love Harry Potter! This is excellent write 🙂
brilliant word flow and also i like how you took the movie an dmade it into your own..awesome..
Brilliant write
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Perfect, Excellent match for the HP series and the prompt..I loved all the images you conjured up that came to life in my mind’s eye !!!
Great work
Wonderful work Jingle! you have a way of capturing my imagination!
Saucy and magical.
Geez, Jingle. This was cool. I liked the repetition of the prompt. It made me almost musical to me.
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