A function may be transcendental,
A mind is emotional;
A pain may be mental,
A cut on hand is physical;
A product may be artificial,
A concert is musical…
Hard to fulfill
life’s proposal,
Some incidents are meant to be confidential;
The look of twins may be identical,
Yet, their stories are absolutely
wonderfully
differentiable.
Thursday Poet’s Rally Week 44, share a free verse or any poetry with poets rally hosted by Leo, Jingle, and more….have fun!
Friday Flash 55, write a story, or a poem, link your post to G-man on Thursday night 7pm…have fun visiting other talented 55 players…. wink!
Jingle Nozelar 
Always amazing how twins can be so very different.
love the last word of your rhyme ‘differentiable” — a perfect ending!
very true….
True indeed. There is a great amount of difference in even identical entities. Good execution!
Excellent, smart verse. And in 55 words to boot! Well done.
Very thoughtful and melodic…
Quite creative and very true!
Loved the twin part!
Cool poem, Jingle!
Does that apply to how we see ourself in the mirror of our life’s expectancies? Hmmmm. Got me t thinkin’ anyway. Great write!!!!!!!!!!
wonderfully well crafted and insightful
This poem has such a nice structure and flow. Well-written insights in just 55 words!
So true. So much said in so few words here just shows your genius!
Amazingly insightful, love the hard work you put in Ji, Have a nice weekend!
lovely!
so much said in 55 words!
thought provoking,loved it=)
brilliantly crafted jingle. loved it.
differentiable. sums up the whole poem. 🙂
Seriously, twins can be so different and yet so alike!
I like the choice of words ..immense essence!
identical yet so different..God never made two ppl to have the exact same qualities.
The poem of the twins is very nice with rhyming ends 🙂
very interesting! love it 🙂
that is so true…
beautifully written
Interesting thoughts so beautiful expressed with striking analogies.
Loved the contrast used Jingle. Great read.
The Lonely Recluse.
Lovely word play to sustain your rhyme. It reminds me of TS Eliot’s practical cats!
Great 55 !
Happy Rally Ji !
Amazing, loved how you ended the poem especially!
I like the rhythm and descriptions! The words about twins also make me wonder how two people who are so identical can be so different. (Also, I want to have twins!) This is another enjoyable read, Ji! 🙂
Beautiful. So simple and true!
Nicely done, Jingle!! Twins have their own language, and similarities, but they strive for differences – and those differences can be night and day!!! Thank you for sharing your creativity with us!! 🙂
Makes me think..your posts are always enveloping different topics each time i read them..
Sometimes a beautiful message..sometimes giving us something to ponder..or sometimes beautifully refreshing..
Alcina
Simple, but true…lovely!
Nice one, Ji.
Bless!
Thank you for visiting my blog page and leaving so many kind notes. I am not quite sure how or where I am supposed to answer the questions before I can participate and submit anything to anywhere.
Your note said: ‘ To become a participant and recelive awards, please submit your entry to our blogger account via the linkz yourself…hope to see you share.”
I’m not exactly sure on what link of yours I’m supposed to submit a sample of my poetry/prose. Sorry, I still seem to get a bit lost finding my way around the site.
From what I’ve read of you today, you write beautifully!
beautiful one ji. 🙂
So true. Well-written =)
a very interesting concept and beautifully done justice to 🙂
Wonderful poem and comparison. Thanks for stopping by. Have a great week. 🙂
Very nice, thanks.
Great poem. Very thought provoking. My twin nephews are so different it is amazing! Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2011/05/19/jubilant/
SO TRUE! I’m a fraternal twin, but we look a lot alike. 🙂
Well thank you, I get to see you poems.( Cute by the way) Learning 55 words.
Jingle Belle…
Thanks again for your wonderful support.
I liked your poem.
Thanks for visiting, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
true and well said…:-)
Jingle this has a jangle to it! I like it!
indeed that is how it is.. 🙂
Thought-provoking and nicely structured. Cute!
I say…Yay, Yay!
hand in hand
Very nice poetry Ji
I look like everybody because… I am “Gene”brother
Genebrother
That brought a sweep of pleasure – and those felines are superb.
creative and interesting………lovely read 🙂
I guess it’s the choices we make that really differentiate us. Good rally.
It has such a fantastic flow with indeed a bevy of astute observations, loved it!
when i was a child i always wished i had a twin sister
I loved this – when I read it, for some reason, my mind keeps ending it with: absolutely, wonderfully different. Somehow by removing the “tiable” ending, the suddeness of ‘different’ adds to the effect – for me. I hope you don’t mind my addition, or rather, subtraction to your wonderful poem. The photos are perfect, both separate and together; isn’t it interesting how cat-like the sisters are, and how feminine the cats? Fulfilling one’s own potential isn’t a matter of fulfilling other’s expectations, but being your own perfect self – just the way you already are – this is the message your poem says to me, and its a message I love. Well Done!
Jingle Belle…Thanks
Your grouping of words and meanings amaze me.
What a great topic!
-poetryroad
lovely 55 Ji.. PS: Ji, I was little upset for the past one week.. I couldn’t write or contribute.. here is post reflecting it ~ my rally post, ~ come on idiot, you are for me ~
! Happy Sunday !
Someone is Special
Really enjoyed this Jingle – your words contain great observations and wisdom 😀
Chloe xx
Very philosophical and so lovely.
interesting play on words 🙂
lovely !!
Well done, a splendid piece!
nicely done, made me smile as I read it 🙂
Excellent! love the fluent flow of words, musical and thoughtful!
With words wonderful,
You make my thoughts tingle.
Beautiful flow of words.
A brilliant crossing of consciousness, like playing chess! Very cool poetry!
Jingle, you rock!
Beautifully expressed sentiments.
simple and beautifully written, just my cup of tea!
Gorgeous 🙂
Twins are double in difference and alike.
Whoa I need to learn from the master of rhyming xD
-RPIMotion Author
there’s a hindi movie song which says, ” we are same same, but different” 🙂 nice read…
Awesome Jingle!
Love the thought — yes, it’s true… differeniable.
That is so true. =)
Hard to fulfill life’s proposal, I love this part
LOVELY
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