has risen above the castle to be seen
as a model carrying no sin.
.
To live and engage,
one must break the door of the cage
and digest the words of the sage.
.
Via a child’s detective eyes,
We invent magic and vampires,
creativity shall win over sins.
*****
uma.a (Haiku)
A wonderful attitude to have and to start the week with.;-)
Wonderful poem..I esp.like the third para thro’ the child ‘s eye.very perfect.
Thanks for participation.
beautiful…both your poem and the image:)
Beautiful reflection of the importance of childhood imaginations.
Thank you for posting here today, it is such an important venue for the children.
Ji, Awesome Haikus, what a way to see through a Child’s eyes.. Nice Ji..
Your blog looks so chill, pleasant background, cool widgets,Sharing features enabled.. Wow.. Superb Ji..
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Someone is Special
Lovely!
The world is not rust and bones and terrible things,
To a child who believes in angel wings,
A world of magic and beauty reigns,
Where people can be trusted and wars don’t exist,
Everybody has food they can’t resist,
And always there’s a cure for aches and pains,
The world for children is innocent and sweet,
That’s where I think we should stop and meet,
And see the world through the eyes of a child,
Filled with wonder and love, without any guile.
Lovely
Jingle this piece had a lovely moral, fantastic…I will continue the prompt as so many responsed this morning…thank you for your support as always…blessings…bkm
Brilliant work with the image…
Love the haikus.. 🙂
tremendous. splendidly written jingle. you created a fairy tale in the poem.
Creativity winning over sins.. I like that thought, Ji 🙂 well said.
We’re in the deep of a lovely ocean today Jingle. I like it. Diving is my favorite thing to do.
Anyway…nice poem through a child’s eyes and mind.
What a wonderful poem! Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2011/01/22/passion/
Only through a child’s imagination can a purple fairy queen exist and be real.
Beautiful, Jingle.
this is beautiful..i love the image that accompany’s the poem, truly exceptional!