That I have ever hurt you.
I want to grab the washcloth of remorse
And wipe my soul for a regeneration.
I want to take hold of the garden hose
And clear the path to the mending of our relation.
I want to be a morning dew,
I want to be the one with you,
I want to be a butterfly,
I want to be a…, you try.
Footsteps of errors may becloud our soul,
Soap of repentance shall save the show.
Armed with regrets and sympathy in the core,
I hope to rediscover my peaceful shore.
Here I ‘m holding a rose,
Take it and accept my remorse.
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Poets United(Forgiveness)
What a lovely poem! If I was hurt by you, the words here and the rose would erase any sign of it! Great writing Jingle!
It is simply a fiction…
romance could be sweet, could be hurting at times…
Lovely, romantic poem. The picture is great, too.
Aw I like this one.
Ji, what a lovely interpretation of the picture. As I look at it, there is a sense of shame. I think you nailed it, friend.
Reconciliation. Relationships. Regrets. Remorse. Repentance. Regeneration. Rediscover. Rose. Room for Romance. Steps on the path of mending a relationship.
I like what you have done with this poem. Also a very good message for all. Relationships take work and often steps of mending to make them work. Thanks for your insights.
I enjoyed this. It made me think of both the giving, but also the need to be able to receive. Nice 🙂
I liked this one……….well done.
If love is so great, why does it hurt so much? You explored this topic well.
truly a slick piece!
Why so many mending-the-heart poetry lately..?? Hope it is just a coincidence.. and not a real life event 😉
Love it like any other theme of poetry you write,
Rachana.
I love he sentiment and kind of soul searching this poem evokes in the one holding the rose. A deffo tenderness with the remorse. A nice read for sure.
What a beautiful poem, Jingle! And the photo is just perfect!
ah, love, the four letter word of much meaning, great poem friend xxx
A fine romantic poem.
Who could say NO when approached in such a heartfelt manner..yes, yes, friends forever!!
Beautifull…I liked it
A dear romance … and you would certainly be forgiven.
I just simply adored this, Ji! “I want to be a…, you try.” was such a sweet and funny surprise! This was gorgeously done!
Awesome poem Jingle. Loved it.
This is fabulous jingle. brilliant, loving and wise.
lots of love.
These lines were sweet, warm and delicate:
“Here I ‘m holding a rose,
Take it and accept my remorse.”
Have a great week ahead.
Cheers!
Simply wow!!! What a lovely poem.
regrets coming from the heart should always be accepted, especially when expressed like you did 🙂
Wow!!! Another nice post.
A fine poem
Another fresh rosy poem ..tQ
It is great idea & made a fantastic reading Ji.
Relationship can only flourish with such a great wisdom.
It is difficult to change so much suddenly after break up, If a person has the capability to rise this much, he/she is unlikely to make a mistake. In any case it is really a fantastic way to rebuild a relationship.
Wow, this is brilliant Jingle. You bring out the feelings of remorse so well. Great poem!
Apologies for not visiting sooner, internet connection at home is so bad I cannot view any blogs, and I’m too bogged down with work at office to visit.
Romance is worth every hurt and tear. To be held by one who loves you is the best feeling in the world.
washcloth of remorse – I really like that!
My favorite poem of yours that I’ve read yet!
Wow, how could anyone NOT forgive after that?
Ji this is too romantic.. Thanks a lot for sharing ji.. I will consider this for Romantic Room of the week Ji..
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So beautiful and romantic! Love it!
Great Great post! love your poems…
..dis is xtremly b’ful…even more dn xtrem…hats off Jingle..!!
Beautiful, so sweet and thought filled, I loved it~