Free your tightened chest,
Forget about your subject test,
Simply relax and rest!
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Freely follow the flow,
Feed family and friends loads of fun,
The future will be divine!
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This is an entry 4 Sensational Haiku Wednesday (Future) at Jenn of You know… that Blog?
and an entry 4 ABC Wednesday, F is 4 Future….
The Only Cin gives Jingle this award today, wow, what a fun and encouraging message for Jingle ! Everyone in this community is cool, thus please feel free to take it if you like it…
Thank You, Cindy, your golden heart! xxx
Please visit Cindy via the following link:
http://theonlycin.wordpress.com/2010/08/25/official-poetry-awards-july/
Jingle, your haikus brought a big ole smile to my face!
wow so nice 🙂
jiiiiiiiiiii 😦 i still don’t know how to link my poems to the haiku and all the toner poetry stuff… HELP!!!!! 😦
and what is haiku?
If U are new, click here to learn about Haiku and in how to write one, good luck. 😉 😉 😉
http://volweb.utk.edu/school/bedford/harrisms/haiku.htm
Lovely Haiku Jingle 🙂
Love your Haiku Jingle.
Absolutely Brilliant!! 🙂
I’m with you on that…
Fantastic Haikus!! 😀
Just what I can relate to….
Your are the champion supporter of everyone. You are wonderful!
awesome one Ji 😀
for the first time even i participated in ABC wednesday 😀
here’s mine 😀
http://megzone.wordpress.com/2010/08/25/froggy-love-story/
Okay,
I know they destroy the entries after the round 7 is over and round 8 begins, thus your entry is accepted,
please also tag Thursday Poets Rally Week 27 if possible,
have fun!
sometimes we just need to relax and go with the flow 🙂 cool poem.
Free flowing fine verse.
ROG, ABC Wednesday team
You deserve the award, Ji!!! It’s totally apt for you! 🙂 Congratulations !!!! 😀
The Haiku you have written are so beautiful… full of lovely messages and cheer… loved the way the first one rhymed! Awesome!
Good God… The more I read from you, the more awestruck I am ! YOU SIMPLY ARE THE BEST (no doubt about it!!)
Cheers!!
i love the idea of feeding friends and family loads of fun…
Thank you Jingle, lovely reminder, will take your advice, relax and feed on fun 🙂
So true haiku. We have to learn live like that. Congrats on the award :)! Supporting friends is a wonderful thing to do. Have a great week.
Freely follow the flow…
Freely follow the flow…
Freely follow the flow…
Freely follow the flow…
Freely follow the flow…
Good song of life attitude!
xoxo
very creative dear , loved it xxx
Well, you certainly fitted a few ‘F’s in that Haiku-form oFFering!
On behalf of the ABC Wednesday team, thanks for taking part this week! 🙂
Wonderful, Jingle! Wish I could relax like that – wise advice!
So happy for the award that Cindy send you…truly deserved and with such a wonderful gesture. Love the poem Ji. Congratulations my friend. xx
My students need to read/hear your first haiku and take it to heart!
My Haiku Wednesday
Ji you always do this… your Haiku is so light, beautiful, thoughtful, insightful…… just made me smile …. thanks Ji for your beautiful work..
you totally deserve the award… for the work you do, the effort you make Evey single day… the pieces you write. you are just unique Ji.
keep rocking Ji
viva la vida!!
Joyful Haiku, from the first line: Free you tightened chest.
If feels like an invitation to an open and joy-filled future. My chest relaxed just reading it. Thanks. – Bill
Wise and clever!!
Thanks for the link re Haiku – I must read it up! Congratulations Jingle!
Sage advice wrapped up in an innocent little poem. Love this. 🙂
Cool Haiku’s.. Great work Jingle…
–Someone Is Special–
Great poem…it is a wonderful piece for meditation…breath out….’Free your tightened chest’…breathe in….’Forget about your subject test’….breathe out….
We are relaxed now, and indeed the future does look divine! 😉
Congrats on your award too!
/Cindy
oh yes, we should just freely follow the flow… brilliant piece here!!! congratulations on your award, jingle! 🙂
Oh Jingle I love your haiku, they always make me smile! 🙂 Thank you and congratulations!
Wow!! Nice one.
I need you whispering that “relax and rest” line in my ear all day!
Thank you for that divine poem. My future already feels brighter 🙂
Wow! Two absolutely delightful haikus Ji. Once clearly written by the teacher in you. I like! … and congratulations on the award – perfect! – from Cindy.
The future does feel brint … but any brighter than today. Enjoy Rally! And, as always, thanks for your hard work.
Thanks for writing some much-needed advice for me today!
Nice poem. The word ‘future’ is a good choice for ‘F’.
Best wishes,
Anna
Anna’s abcWed-F-words
Wow – I really like your Haiku – especially the first one here – the words are SOoooo great.
Life is good my friend! Chloe 😀 xx
I absolutely love the alliteration in your Haiku! It makes me smile.
fantastic piece. 🙂
Jingle my heartfelt thanks for the comments @ my post! Do check out Ur nomination here:
http://puplumages.wordpress.com/2010/09/01/the-exorbitantly-priced-smile/
&
http://puplumages.wordpress.com/my-hall-of-fame/
This is Purvi from:
http://puplumages.wordpress.com/
I still can’t get into haiku lol. Nice work!