There are two lyrics
About summer,
One hangs in space,
Obligated by the sun
And the sound of ocean waves,
Obscured under the shades of green cliffs;
The other one is abstract,
Kept alive by spirits
And the bubbles of your dreams,
Deflected from the reality
of conflicts and grieves.
Thoughts linger in minds,
Fish swim in waters,
Pumpkins ripen on vines,
and the direction of the wind matters
Because it defines your beliefs.
The images of the Fall season mark a future
In nature
That spans the gap between the unknown
And the known.
It is late August,
Don’t dwell in the bathtub for too long,
Listen to your favorite summer song
Before it is completely gone!
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Caw Caw! Autumn’s coming..even here…
Warm Aloha from Waikiki 🙂
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Another nice post. Even the pics are lovely.
Great poem!
Beautiful Jingle, you really have a way with words! Very uplifting post!
Jingle.. this was a fantastic read…
Magnificent imagery!!!! I applaud at your creation here… what a superb take on this Magpie!! Totally unexpected!!! And absolutely brilliant!
“Don’t dwell in the bathtub for too long,
Listen to your favorite summer song
Before it is completely gone” — I was shell-shocked!! Amazingly written!!
Kudos, dear… you really really ROCK!!!
Happy weekend to you… get out of that bathtub already.. 😉
fantastic fragrance of summer breeze. we feel romantic about winter. 🙂
I love it! Don’t dwell in the bathtub too long… Great poem! Thank you for sharing.
This is nice!
Frankly, right now, dwelling in a bathtub sounds wonderful. I’m typing this from a campground.
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Excellent my friend. You are so good with this 🙂
I love summer…or did, until it hit 105.
Ah, much to think about in this one. Our summer songs are all too often drowned out by the constant whir of day to day living and work, aren’t they? And then suddenly autumn is here, and so many find they haven’t listened.
I liked the way you put all of that. Growth and mystery all at once.
Ji this is awsome, loved how you captured the very essence of the topic, bravo xx
I love it……like a song in itself……
Great poem…it depicts great scenery… =)
Lovely post, Jingle!
A wonderful read, Jingle. Bravo! 🙂
Beautifully done Jingle. Enjoyed the read.
Happy Sunday 2 u all!
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ha ha
such a sweet poem 🙂
That’s beautiful!
Best wishes to you!