This is an entry for Magpie Tale at magpie tale
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Getting out of bed
With an aching head,
She decides to write
Something bright
Based on Willow’s Guild.
Yet, all through the night,
Nothing comes out alright.
Biting her lips tight,
She continues to fight
About what might
Fit the given prompt right.
She desires something white,
Something light,
Somethings quite
quiet,
Or something related to plight
or diet…
A kitten’s purr
makes a stir,
She opens her door
And starts to explore;
Twilight is in the air,
Muses hit her,
No more feelings of despair,
She takes a deep breath
And grins-
Thoughts do have wings
When one opens up to many things.
Magpie Tale Prompt #24
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So true, thoughts do have wings when we are open 😉
a very fresh Magpie, nice!
BRILLIANT!!!!! Thoughts do have wings indeed!!! They come and go in seconds… don’t stay when you really want them to! 🙂
This was toooo good a poem, and I could totally relate to it! Sometimes, you really wanna write something, and never quite understand what to write about!
awesome!!
very true a fabulous tale xxx
Hurray for wings and open Mind! A very lovely tale… I enjoyed this so much. Heartspell
“Thoughts do have wings”…. I like that vey much. 🙂
thoughts do have wings Jingle…nice magpie…my thought are flying…blessings..bkm
You have a way to make anything you write sing to us/ 🙂
This is worthy of a song Jingle…so true in my life too:) Thanks for sharing x
Beautiful. You are so very clever with words.
You have poemed true, Ji! Nice, neat, tight story in a verse. Thanks! 🙂
what beautifully flown thoughts!
Lovely.
Jingle always rocks.
Awesome!!!
“Yet, all through the night,
Nothing comes out alright.
Biting her lips tight,
She continues to fight”
Oh I know how she feels… 🙂
Such a lovely poem Jingle and beautiful words- this can be a song, I can hear the melody in my head!
Gr8 work Jingle.
Wonderful site and theme, would really like to see a bit more content though!
Great post all around, added your XML feed! Love this theme, too!
Do you know Mr Hermithaven? Somehow your poem reminded me of him ;-). he stopped by my blog once, we fought, or well, I sharpened my claws on his neck, then he added me to his blogroll and we haven’t talked since :-)))) But his writing is cool:
http://hermithaven.wordpress.com/
Have fun! 😉
Yes I agree…thoughts have wings …they come and go but are never permanent.. brilliant poem !
Find your own line of thought.
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nice one 😉
that is so beautifully said… thoughts indeed have wings 😀
nice one jingle.
How nice, Jingle. I also enjoyed your cool header. :+) I enjoy your thoughts with wings.
How very clever!
sometimes my thoughts fly in and out so fast it’s hard to catch them! Cleverly written
so clever, and such rhyme! this piece really flows, and captures all too well the frustration of the muse-less writer, as well as the ecstasy of inspiration.
cheers!
I love the idea that “thoughts do have wings”. Sometimes it just takes a little while to find them.
just fantastic. 🙂
reminded me of my kittens. 🙂
I can certainly relate. I often have trouble with my own prompts!
I lOVED this…really, so simple and yet so succint…thoughts do have wings when you open up your mind 🙂 and, i’d love it if you accept a small token of appreciation here http://amritaghosh.wordpress.com/2010/07/28/pink/
thanks a lot for the encouraging words and lovely sentiments.
Cheers!
😉
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A creative and catchy piece!
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