Just like the ripples of water
When throwing in a stone,
The rings of the phone
make stirring sound.
Lan’s heart beats
As she gives her puppy some treats
The phone keeps ringing,
Boots barks, waiting,
Lan scoops her up,
“Hello, what’s up?”
What does she hear?
U tell me, dear!
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22 thoughts on “55-The Rings of The Phone”
This was absolutely adorable!!! hehehe
Lovely images formed in my head.. 🙂 and cute baby voices cooed in my ears…
A very sweet 55!!! Perfect for a Friday!!!
lovely poem 🙂
i loved it…and the rhyming is toooo good 🙂
Ah wonder how the story goes on 😀
Lovely and well done!
have a great weekend 🙂
Cute pics…..also lovely use of words.
Hehe loved the poem- “What does she hear? U tell me, dear!” Lovely Jingle! 🙂 Happy Friday.
Hey that was neat!
fun and lovely. Nice.
I like the image of a ringing phone causing ripples.
Awesome, I could actually imagine it!! Lovely to read on my quiet Saturday morning! Thanks so much Jingle ~ x
What a cute story for me to see played out in my head. 🙂 Thanks. Have a happy day. 🙂
Why is she afraid of the phone?
Love the comparisons with the ripples and the ringing. The poem brought a lot of good images….what did she hear? I can only guess.
So nice!!! So simple!!! So lovely!
very nice indeed dear, another winner xxx
this is a cool poem jingle.
I enjoyed this rally.
You can decide for yourself on tuesday as to whether my post is eligible for the rally
wow! i too wonder, what did she hear?
Adorable poem, I really enjoyed it! 🙂
What a fun 55 — Pavlov’s dog, eh?? 🙂