The setting sun is turning
From white, yellow to sea-rose red,
As folks living in Eastern world
R still snuggling in bed.
I have amplified my strength
Three hundred times,
I have wished 2 be as novel as spring water
With No plotted crimes.
Over the past decades,
I have been holding my breath, appearing clever,
Now, I let go of my world
So that it rolls down the hill into the river.
On my way back home,
My attention waxes and wanes no more,
Follow the path from one to another,
I let the unsubscribed nature decorate my door.
*****
Return to the nature and be one in the universe is kind of reunion 2 me.
This is an entry 4 (Reunion) Writer’s Island
I also enter this piece for Monday Poetry Train Revisited:
http://mondaypoetrytrainrevisited.wordpress.com/2010/07/12/88-monday-poetry-train-revisited/
Happy Saturday!
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Jingle Nozelar 
Indeed returning to nature is a kind of reunion for sure. Very nice work!
I love the idea of being
“as novel as spring water
With No plotted crimes.”
and this too:
“Now I let go of my world
So that it rolls down the hill into the river.”
U R so refreshing to read! 🙂
love the word choice and ryme scheme
I too, like letting go of the world and letting it roll into the river. Coming back to yourself and to nature is certainly a reunion I applaud. Good poem.
Elizabeth
very nice poem Ji, it was as if you had read a script, excellently done xxx
Jingle
Oh I love this and the bit about snuggling in bed is just delightful!
Pamela
Reuniting with nature, something that is not often done for most people, is a wonderful idea. A great post, and an excellent take on the prompt!
-Weasel
Thoroughly enjoyed this. And thanks for stopping by Scrambled, Not Fried, commenting on my work.
That’s the kind of reunion I love to attend.
Oh, Jingle this is so nice. I turly did enjoy reading it.
I let the unsubscribed nature decorate my door…that is just beautiful!! What a powerful poem to remind us what’s important. Thanks Ji, you are so talented!! ~ Hugs x
Going back to your roots is a reunion worth attending.
wonderful as always jingle.
Thanks for sharing this
Nice rhyme scheme, Jingle. Nature is something we return to, always. Well done.
You make me wanna fall in love with nature once again =) Thank for sharing such a wonderful poem 😀
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Nature is always wondrous both a reunion and communion. BTW, I’ve nominated you for the One Lovely Blog award. You can find it at http://randomthoughtsandmusings.wordpress.com/2010/07/18/one-lovely-blog/
hi Jingle! 🙂
OH MY!! such lovely poetry and feelings 🙂
follow which path?
Good Lord! That was breathtakingly beautiful!! Nature sure has her way of bringing out the best in us!
Kudos to her AND to you! 🙂
Have a wonderfully bright week ahead!
We do need to pay respect to nature and appreciate the beauty we have around us with a smile. 🙂
This was an enjoyable take on the prompt.
http://thelaughinghousewife.wordpress.com
In touch with nature is a great place to be always… Heartspell
very nice poem Jingle 🙂
Whoa — that is incredibly BEAUTIFUL!!!
Amazing poem. Love it so much.
Good job!!!
xoxo
nicely united and written thanks for sharing you words
This is gorgeous!
Everyone should enjoy nature every day!
Wow Jingle.. very nice poem. This is something I can totally relate to!!!
I wish I was there…looked beautiful in my mind.
just fantastic. loved the feelings of the poem and the inner meaning.