Our sunny days are gone,
The season of green is through,
The warm words I used to
Greet you
have turned pale,
My life has turned to blue.
*****
The once-flowery garden
Now glistens with dew.
The dove has disappeared all of a sudden.
No sign of life grew,
Home alone,
My life has turned to blue.
*****
I know the truth,
No news may be good news.
Winter is the past,
Spring has arrived at last.
Until I see you,
My life is the color of blue!
WOW..a romantic poem from Jingle..
WAY COOL!
I love it!
hugs
shakira
Aw. Such longing. Makes me sad.
to everyone this has a different meaning,
today you have captured my emotions in your beautiful words.
I hope you’re not feeling as blue as I am 😉
Hugs!
I feel a huge sense of romance in every word you write….You sure are a guru in poetry….
I’d love you to have a feel of this:
http://ediomoudofia.blogspot.com/2010/04/gratitude-amidst-agony.html
Wonderfully penned jingle. You are getting to be an excellent poet. Love this piece.
I love this Ji!
Lovely poem and blog. How fun to read.
I dig this poem Jingle,
🙂
Peace,
Laz
u immediately took me a to a place about 10 yrs ago…when “no sign of life grew”, I was “home alone”. (my husband passed away in 2000 & i was only 23).
~IS
Sadness, romance, love, and longing…such emotions, good poem!
Blue is a brilliant color that can be looked out in a lot of ways. I love the way that you have expressed it here. 🙂 Have fun today Jingle……
I like that. I hope its a thought and not an occurrance.
I should post some of my work.
a colorful poem, jingle , well delivered.
and blue is my favorite color by the way. 🙂
“Until I see you,
My life is the color of blue!”
ahhh…i loved the end! 😀
this was really sweet, awe, felt so warm reading this xx
…and my life remains blue
until you give me a clue
of when ur coming is due.
Cheers Ji!
u sound like worsworth;)
super cool!! 🙂 hope your life turns green again soon.
Beautiful poem, and your blog is fantastic.