I seek spring in vain
From the trace of your footsteps,
I search cure for pain
From the tears welling up in my eyes.
I fear going astray,
But no way is the right way.
Winding downward,
I see that each river finds its path to ocean,
Every choice leads to the home of emotion.
I dream of sitting on a swing,
Hearing the birds sing,
I fancy about reciprocated bliss,
Loving with embrace and kiss.
Tree leaves bend in soft breeze,
Flowers wink to the seen.
Thoughts fall on earth,
Wait for a rebirth.
rebirth is on its way…
nicely done ji!
yes,
Brian!
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Oh how beautifu. I too love the line rebirth is on its way. That makes a statement. Wonderfully done my friend.
It is nice of you, Viola!
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Wow that’s so beautiful!
10Q,
Kathy.
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good post. 🙂
time passes, life goes on and pain’s obscured then rebirth comes.
Agree,
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I like the first two lines a lot.
10Q,
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“Breath Taking”!!! Truly “Breath Taking”!!! Love it.
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Pat:
you make me smile!
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This is so beautiful!
Touched my heart and made me a bit sad and happy at the same time.
Nicole:
Sweet comment!
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impressive! well done jingle.Good use of natre elements to convey emotions.
Wordwand:
you are kind!
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Very good one. it makes a dreamy picture in mind.
Trisha:
nice of you.
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Good morning Jingle and thanks for stopping in “Happy Wednesday”! Love you and have a fun day. 😀
We caught each other,
what fun! Pat!
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wow!! Lovely.
Sandra:
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Awesome!! another great work Jingle.
Collin:
Neat!
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Nice post. Jingle rocks as usual.
Pamela:
Nice to see you,
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the rebirth of a Queen!
Happy New Birthday Jingle!
Nice to see you, dusty
Happy Day!
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Beautiful, Jingle!
Mama Zen:
10Q.
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Spring is in the air…for sure! Nice one Jingle. 🙂
Doraz:
10Q.
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that was amazing, u captured the very essence of spring and made it beautiful xxx I am in, poem all ready to go on tomorrow xxx and hey dear, thanks again for the lovely awards xx
Sweet,
William!
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There are some beautiful images here that resonate softly but clearly, like spring.
10q.
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great poem Jingle! ♥♥
Art:
10Q.
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