I:
10,9, counting is fun,
8, 7, after ten is eleven,
6, 5, you can survive,
4, 3, reading is free,
2, 1, let it shine.
II:
10, 9, walk and run,
8, 7, odd and even,
6, 5, swimming and dive,
4, 3, oppose and agree,
2, 1, the moon and the sun.
III:
10, 9, draw a line,
8, 7, dream about Heaven,
6, 5, bliss will arrive,
4, 3, plant a tree,
2, 1, everything is fine.
IV:
10, 9, hot cross bun,
8, 7, baked in the oven,
6, 5, a fork and a knife,
4, 3, charge No fee,
2, 1, a job well done.
V:
10, 9, praise the Divine,
8, 7, smile often,
6, 5, ready to drive,
4, 3, wait and see,
2, 1, celebrate with wine.
VI:
10, 9, I am your fan,
8, 7, my name is Steven,
6, 5, do high five,
4, 3, obtain a degree,
2, 1, let the healing begin.
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This poem is entered for Poetry Pantry Week 3:
http://poetryblogroll.blogspot.com/2010/08/poetry-pantry-is-now-open-week-3.html
very good Ji, how clever…. you seem to be able to fulfill a challenge very well and u succeeded..well done…:)
Thank you for the music in my ears, everyone can do it if they spend time and set their mind to it.
Have a smiling day,
Awesome — you’re obviously a natural poet.
Wine – Divine, that’s a fact, Jack! 🙂
Dear Jannie:
It is such a sweet treat to have you over…:)
i appreciate your support, you have sharp eyes and good sense of humor yourself.
Whooo weee I loved #3~ And it aint no jive, I also loved 5!
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Glad that you like one or two of them, sheila, Glad to see you light up and smile 🙂 🙂
WOW! You did a great job with this poem. Very patient and a very wonderful person.
My favortie:
“10, 9, I am your fan,”
and your friend!
Gerardine Baugh
http://gerardinebaugh.wordpress.com/
Thank you for the kind words, good luck on your novel writing…
you will have your wish come true!
sweet dreams. 🙂
cool and challenging, wonderfully written, #5 caught my attention the most though:) Thank for sharing^^~
Glad that u like #5.
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4, 3, reading is free,…
…true indeed.
many thanks!
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Awesome post! This was fun to read!
-Weasel
thanks a ton!
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Okay, you have inspired me to plunge in and try something different with my next poem:)
let me know after you post your next poem!
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An enjoyable and fun read! Made me smile.
many thanks!
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Great rhyming poem with a story within. Well done, Jingle!
10Q for the kind words…
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We seem to be circling each other; I visited Poets United from your list of writing communities, and then I saw a poem in the list with a title that matches a line in one of my poems (taken from a song by blues master E.G. Kight). And then I learned it was a piece written by you. What a small world.
I love your counting rhythm; it works so well for your piece!
many thanks…
the world is small,
I don’t know which poem u refer to,
thanks for the comment.
very cute!!!!! 🙂
alaurilee
thanks!