Count From 10 to 1, Let the Healing begin!

I:

10,9, counting is fun,

8, 7, after ten is eleven,

6, 5, you can survive,

4, 3, reading is free,

2, 1, let it shine.

II:

10, 9, walk and run,

8, 7, odd and even,

6, 5, swimming and dive,

4, 3, oppose and agree,

2, 1, the moon and the sun.

III:

10, 9, draw a line,

8, 7, dream about Heaven,

6, 5, bliss will arrive,

4, 3, plant a tree,

2, 1, everything is fine.

IV:

10, 9, hot cross bun,

8, 7, baked in the oven,

6, 5, a fork and a knife,

4, 3, charge No fee,

2, 1, a job well done.

V:

10, 9, praise the Divine,

8, 7, smile often,

6, 5, ready to drive,

4, 3, wait and see,

2, 1, celebrate with wine.

VI:

10, 9, I am your fan,

8, 7, my name is Steven,

6, 5, do high five,

4, 3, obtain a degree,

2, 1, let the healing begin.

*****

This poem is entered for Poetry Pantry Week 3:

http://poetryblogroll.blogspot.com/2010/08/poetry-pantry-is-now-open-week-3.html

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24 thoughts on “Count From 10 to 1, Let the Healing begin!

    1. Dear Jannie:

      It is such a sweet treat to have you over…:)
      i appreciate your support, you have sharp eyes and good sense of humor yourself.

  1. We seem to be circling each other; I visited Poets United from your list of writing communities, and then I saw a poem in the list with a title that matches a line in one of my poems (taken from a song by blues master E.G. Kight). And then I learned it was a piece written by you. What a small world.

    I love your counting rhythm; it works so well for your piece!

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