Thursday Poets Rally Week 70 (August 9-15, 2012)
Bluebell Books Twitter Club Short Story Slam Week 25
The sky is awake and quiet,
Festive like poetry,
The sea is salty, navy blue,
Kim and Theode, only two
come to everyone’s view,
No trees or seagulls for miles,
But stillness in the air,
hot, wet, and watchful,
Fish hides under water,
Quivering on fathomless depth of blue,
Kim is sad,
She swallows hard,
Hoping for the change of the mood,
Life has given her headaches,
She decides to go away,
blindly, she moves forward,
without carrying her cell phone,
without knowing the next destination,
It’s late August,
She becomes thirsty and hungry soon,
dark thoughts keep her going,
also make her shiver with fears,
maybe when she sees trees, houses,
she will find love or comfort,
even ways or solutions to happiness.


good luck for Kim, keep going…
Good poetry, as always. Hopeful and full of longing.
i like your blog
good luck on her.
love it.
nice story…
Nice poem
lovely.
nice write…
A very beautiful open verse poem!
wow…
what a ride.
Nice story with vivid imagery:)
A very expressive and captivating piece.